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"Loss"

May 14, 2013
By dimez_15 SILVER, Hardeeville, South Carolina
dimez_15 SILVER, Hardeeville, South Carolina
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Don't let people live your life, you live your own life


I am so lost without you
It's like a bird without wings
You passed away yet I cant keep going
You wanted us to stop with the crying

But I can't knowing that your not here
Our life is empty without you in it
Like a body with no soul
You had complete our life and some others

The house you lived in is now dull and boring
Knowing that I cant come say hey to you
Or know that I'm not going to be able to make a conversation with you
You had taught me how to ride my first bike

But now that your gone I don't know who will teach me anything
You also gave me words of wisdom and happiness
But now that you're gone who will do that either
I will always love you and remember you in my heart

"Loss"


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece because I lost something special which was my grand-daddy.

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on May. 22 2013 at 10:33 am
dimez_15 SILVER, Hardeeville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let people live your life, you live your own life

I really liked my poem