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May 11, 2013
By Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
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Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
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I was Born from a Boom-Box

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I hate this life
I wish I could die
Then I wouldn't have to pretend
To be happy
I can't keep going on
It hurts way too much
Without you in my life
Without your gentle touch

I hurt so much on the inside
But it doesn't show through
I will always feel this way
Until I can finally be with you

My life is worth nothing
No joy in my heart
I wish we could forget
And have a brand new start

I want you to come back
I need you here with me
I wish he'd be here holding me close
But he just doesn't see my love for him

Until you return
I'll feel this way
I'll never forget you
Not even for a day

© Gina W., Glen Gardner, NJ

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Poetry2Love SILVER said...
on May. 25 2013 at 8:52 pm
Poetry2Love SILVER, Bronx, New York
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&ldquo;Keep your face to the sun and you will never see the shadows.&rdquo; ~ Helen Keller

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Aww, it's adorable. I really like it.
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2013 at 5:32 pm
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
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thank you soooooo much :P
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2013 at 5:31 pm
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
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WOW  Thank you..that means a lot.
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2013 at 5:30 pm
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
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Thank you so much!!
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2013 at 5:29 pm
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
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turn the frown the other way around
Fallen_ PLATINUM said...
on May. 21 2013 at 5:29 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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This is really good, your poem decribes what you feel perfectly and it pulls me in wanting to read more and more
Reese18 SILVER said...
on May. 21 2013 at 5:28 pm
Reese18 SILVER, Redford, Michigan
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that&#039;s totally awesome

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wow thats absolutley amazing . I feel like that sometimes.... with certain people... Love it ! Amazing
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2013 at 5:17 pm
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
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Thank you so much <3
SunnyDreams BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2013 at 5:15 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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i feel exactiy the same way :(
Brittany-NamedTheFluffMastahNumber2 GOLD said...
on May. 21 2013 at 5:15 pm
Brittany-NamedTheFluffMastahNumber2 GOLD, Milford, Connecticut
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The person that you&#039;d take a bullet for is behind the trigger. <br /> (song)<br /> Miss Missing You - Fall Out Boy (:

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THIS WAS AMAZING!!!!  FANTASTIC JOBBBBB, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK :)
alone.15.forever said...
on May. 20 2013 at 7:23 pm
alone.15.forever, Temecula, California
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That was beautiful. well written. it basically descibes how almost every girl feels.
poeticlove143 GOLD said...
on May. 20 2013 at 7:15 pm
poeticlove143 GOLD, St. Martinville, Louisiana
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Your poem describes what alot of girls go through. Your really good.
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on May. 20 2013 at 7:10 pm
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This is good. Don't get me wrong....I just feel it's been DONE before, ya know? It needed a little something....unique......I don't know. Still good! 4 1/2 stars :D