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without you

May 11, 2013
By Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
4 articles 1 photo 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was Born from a Boom-Box


I hate this life
I wish I could die
Then I wouldn't have to pretend
To be happy
I can't keep going on
It hurts way too much
Without you in my life
Without your gentle touch

I hurt so much on the inside
But it doesn't show through
I will always feel this way
Until I can finally be with you

My life is worth nothing
No joy in my heart
I wish we could forget
And have a brand new start

I want you to come back
I need you here with me
I wish he'd be here holding me close
But he just doesn't see my love for him

Until you return
I'll feel this way
I'll never forget you
Not even for a day


The author's comments:
The love of my life doesn't realize how much he means to me

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on May. 25 2013 at 8:52 pm
Poetry2Love SILVER, Bronx, New York
8 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Keep your face to the sun and you will never see the shadows.” ~ Helen Keller

Aww, it's adorable. I really like it.

on May. 21 2013 at 5:32 pm
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
4 articles 1 photo 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was Born from a Boom-Box

thank you soooooo much :P

on May. 21 2013 at 5:31 pm
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
4 articles 1 photo 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was Born from a Boom-Box

WOW  Thank you..that means a lot.

on May. 21 2013 at 5:30 pm
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
4 articles 1 photo 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was Born from a Boom-Box

Thank you so much!!

on May. 21 2013 at 5:29 pm
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
4 articles 1 photo 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was Born from a Boom-Box

turn the frown the other way around

on May. 21 2013 at 5:29 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

This is really good, your poem decribes what you feel perfectly and it pulls me in wanting to read more and more

Reese18 SILVER said...
on May. 21 2013 at 5:28 pm
Reese18 SILVER, Redford, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 34 comments

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that's totally awesome

wow thats absolutley amazing . I feel like that sometimes.... with certain people... Love it ! Amazing

on May. 21 2013 at 5:17 pm
Kittycatdancer15 BRONZE, Temecula, California
4 articles 1 photo 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was Born from a Boom-Box

Thank you so much <3

on May. 21 2013 at 5:15 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

i feel exactiy the same way :(

on May. 21 2013 at 5:15 pm
Brittany-NamedTheFluffMastahNumber2 GOLD, Milford, Connecticut
15 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
The person that you&#039;d take a bullet for is behind the trigger. <br /> (song)<br /> Miss Missing You - Fall Out Boy (:

THIS WAS AMAZING!!!!  FANTASTIC JOBBBBB, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK :)

on May. 20 2013 at 7:23 pm
alone.15.forever, Temecula, California
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That was beautiful. well written. it basically descibes how almost every girl feels.

on May. 20 2013 at 7:15 pm
poeticlove143 GOLD, St. Martinville, Louisiana
15 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; The Lord is my Shepherd there is nothing I shall want&quot; Psalm 23:1

Your poem describes what alot of girls go through. Your really good.

on May. 20 2013 at 7:10 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

This is good. Don't get me wrong....I just feel it's been DONE before, ya know? It needed a little something....unique......I don't know. Still good! 4 1/2 stars :D