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Blamed-Triplet

May 20, 2013
By Akanekusa SILVER, Jersey City, New Jersey
Akanekusa SILVER, Jersey City, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Art is messy&quot;-Miss.Berry(My fave art teacher)<br /> Q:&quot;how-when did you come?&quot;-Anybody/A:Magic&quot;-Me<br /> &quot;Liquid sounds so unique&quot;-My Sis


Red is the color of Blood

She was frozen as she stood

But escape little girl-if you could.


The author's comments:
This maybe a confusing story but the title tells it all-a girl is balmed for a death. Did she cause it? Well-thats up to you!

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Akanekusa said...
on May. 28 2013 at 6:32 pm
With the most sincerest respects: Sure-I might continue the poem since a person has requested it :D

on May. 28 2013 at 12:46 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Hey there! I enjoyed the simplicity of the poem, though it turned into much more. The deeper meaning beneath is very intense. I am impressed that you were able to put so much emotion into such a short poem. I'd like to see this continued into a long poem, I'd like to learn about the backstory. I thought this was very, very interesting. Good job.