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Why Don't You Love Me

May 28, 2013
By aSimplesmile. GOLD, Fallriver, Massachusetts
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aSimplesmile. GOLD, Fallriver, Massachusetts
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&quot;The most Beautiful thing about a Girl is confidence.&quot;<br /> &quot;Just want to Make it !&quot;

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I Want to Talk To You .
Am I Too Dirty , Am I Too Flirty
Do I Like What You Like ? Am I Shy ? Am I Giving You Looks That Makes You Want To Cry ?
Are These Looks too sad ? I Can Be Anything you Like or Maybe Anything More.
All I See Don't Make Sense.
Am I The Problem . Why Is It When I Fall To My Feet , I Wear My Heart On My Sleeve All I See Makes No Sense You Are The Part Of Me That Is Amazing .
So Now Tell Me Why Don't You Love Me ?

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aSimplesmile. GOLD said...
on May. 30 2013 at 3:15 pm
aSimplesmile. GOLD, Fallriver, Massachusetts
10 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most Beautiful thing about a Girl is confidence.&quot;<br /> &quot;Just want to Make it !&quot;

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Thanks and Your Writng is Amazing too :]
aSimplesmile. GOLD said...
on May. 30 2013 at 3:14 pm
aSimplesmile. GOLD, Fallriver, Massachusetts
10 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most Beautiful thing about a Girl is confidence.&quot;<br /> &quot;Just want to Make it !&quot;

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Thanks:)  
alex18 BRONZE said...
on May. 29 2013 at 5:29 pm
alex18 BRONZE, Jersey City, New Jersey
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&quot;A certain darkness is needed to see the stars.&quot;

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this is amazing! you're a great writer
Fallen_ PLATINUM said...
on May. 29 2013 at 4:04 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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&quot; a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness&quot;

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absultly (know i misspelled) amazing love it love it times a million cause its the truth
aSimplesmile. GOLD said...
on May. 29 2013 at 3:24 pm
aSimplesmile. GOLD, Fallriver, Massachusetts
10 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most Beautiful thing about a Girl is confidence.&quot;<br /> &quot;Just want to Make it !&quot;

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Thanks very much :)
aSimplesmile. GOLD said...
on May. 29 2013 at 3:24 pm
aSimplesmile. GOLD, Fallriver, Massachusetts
10 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most Beautiful thing about a Girl is confidence.&quot;<br /> &quot;Just want to Make it !&quot;

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Thank you :)  
aSimplesmile. GOLD said...
on May. 29 2013 at 3:23 pm
aSimplesmile. GOLD, Fallriver, Massachusetts
10 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most Beautiful thing about a Girl is confidence.&quot;<br /> &quot;Just want to Make it !&quot;

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Thank you very Much !
FallingInLove96 BRONZE said...
on May. 29 2013 at 1:35 pm
FallingInLove96 BRONZE, Bonney Lake, Washington
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&quot;I don&#039;t know where I stand with you. And I don&#039;t know what I mean to you. All I know is every time I think of you, all I wanna do is be with you.&quot; -Unknown

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I absolutely love this poem! You are a very good writer:)
mohamedoe_x3 BRONZE said...
on May. 29 2013 at 9:29 am
mohamedoe_x3 BRONZE, New York, New York
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Be Yourself

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this is good wow :) !
OlveraJorge1 said...
on May. 29 2013 at 8:57 am
This is heartbreaking but a very well written piece