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Just Beneath the Surface
To look into deep water
And only see your face reflected,
Is how I feel.
All things are interconnected,
Grasped by some force,
Almost gravitational,
That all paths have
Meanings and
Metaphorical resonances.
I never feel as
Wild as when
I look in the
Mirror and grin
Or as uncivilized.
The grin,
The mirror,
Are all things
Reflected?
Or is that only
Me?
Through the mirrors
Of time and
The pools of death,
Am I reflected
Through all of these?
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However, although some of the sentences do appear to be different and unique, which works greatly to its advantage, I would recomend using more semi collons ( ; ) to break up your lines instead of commas as it gives the poem a better tempo and understanding when reading it, as i found myself having to re-read parts.
This was still a very good piece, keep it up :)
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