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June 7, 2013
By Arty96 BRONZE, Madera, California
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Arty96 BRONZE, Madera, California
2 articles 17 photos 5 comments

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&quot;Be who you are....Speak your mind,<br /> Because the ones who matter, don&#039;t mind,<br /> And the ones who mind, don&#039;t matter&quot; Dr. Seuss

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Look at me
Something I cannot believe

the empty pit deep within
the peach

Sweet, soft
and nothing yellow or black

It has now fallen onto the ground

© Benjamin B., Highland Park, IL

The author's comments:
I got inspired because it impresses me how clean ans smooth a peach can be from the pit area. so i thought that one day it will get dirty.
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