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Poem for the World MAG
June 20, 2013
The world holds us
in the deep hollow
of her smooth palm
like silvery ethereal
dust motes;
suddenly
she sneezes,
blowing us away
onto the floor,
then crushes us
with her
stiletto
as if we were
expendable cockroaches
Crunch!
© Amber L., Carpinteria, CA
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east_of_ada said...
on Oct. 23 2013 at 8:09 pm
congrats on the publication~~
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2013 at 5:27 pm
Hey, congrats on getting this poem in the magazine, btw XDD
LaChouette GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2013 at 4:03 pm
I don't want to be a dust mote! It's scary, but I feel like it's true. Anyway, this is a great poem. A lot of things i've read about Mother Nature are about how she's sweet, kind, and caring and all those other soft, gentle words. This really packs a punch! And I like it! It's a real wake- up call. The originality in this is awesome. Great Job!
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jul. 4 2013 at 1:34 pm
LOL. XD no problem
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 2 2013 at 6:45 pm
Hmmmm, i will think on the emailing thing..... It's good that your poetry stays but its terrible tht there is an age limit :( its 19 right? Well i hope you don't age out anytime soon because that would be terrible not getting to read your poetry!!!
I think they stay. Just that we're not able to use them anymore. I dunno if you've noticed. But some poems have their authors real names. Which I suspect means those authors aged their accounts. At least out work has a home. And yeah, I'd hate to be a Stiff. Sorry. And can't wait to see you there.—And doooooooooooooooo email me. We can talk more. And give sneek peeks of our works. And inspire. Thanks.
thatunknownthing DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 1 2013 at 8:26 am
crunch? cool. I liked this, I wanna meet earth now! :P
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jun. 29 2013 at 7:49 pm
RED STILETTOS! Okay so my best friend and I have this thing where we pretend that his secret weapon is a poisonous red stiletto and that was the first thing that popped in my head when I read this..anyways AWESOME JOB and I HATE COCKROACHES and DARN YOU EARTH.
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 26 2013 at 6:11 pm
Haha yeah, I could never do abnegation. I am way to selfish and overly imaginative and curious. And dont even get me mad! If I dont like what someone said to me or my friend I will tell them straight to their face in the truthiest way possible. And I can lie ;) I once convinced this girl that I went to jail haha. I have a question that you may or may not have the answer too: what happens to our teenink accounts when we age out? Do they go away? Cuz that would make me cry.... Anyway, ya! Tell me when you read it and maybe I will email you sometime soon. Have a fabulous summer filled with poetry, divergence and Florence. see you in paris!
Thank you, as always. The earth is s*xy. And fickle. Like all s*xy people sometimes. -_- Or so I've heard. JK. The stiletto imagery, I just felt had to be there. I remember you saying the earth is s*xy, so I thought, well then she must wear stilettos. And thank you for wanting to take such a picture. I'm honored. And you're lucky Alaska is cockroach-free. Virginia isn't. But my mom's a neat-freak so I haven't seen one in years. At least not in my house. Thanks again, literary pal. ^u^
I will definitely let you know when I read it. And yes, I do email quiet a few people from Teenink. I mean, I wanna be able to keep in touch with most of the people here. Otherwise, I think we'd might all forget each other in the future. And I think I'd be divergent too. Not cuz everyone says they would be. But sometimes I can be fearless. I love to read and learnd new things. And sometimes, I'll tell people the truth straight up in their faces...when I'm mad. Though, I hate to admit but I can lie pretty well. I try to maintain peace as much as I can. But if you're bullying, oh no, my friend, we have a problem. As for Abnegation, I loose their; I try, but I can be selfsih...and overly curious. Plus, all the rules there, not my cup of tea. And the songs you chose are just divine. I love 'em both. Have a fantastic summer too.
