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Here we go

June 16, 2013
By -Hopeless- GOLD, Hudson, Indiana
-Hopeless- GOLD, Hudson, Indiana
16 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The lines that have no rhyme, are the ones that mean the most&quot; -Me-<br /> <br /> &quot;Are you with me, or will you fall to your knees?&quot; - We came as romans-


So I write this as I go,
Something for gratitude that I'd like to show.
I write this for you, those who read.
I hope you know that your effort is like a growing seed.
For you encourage, you encourage me.
This becomes courage and allows me to be free.
You gave me these words, so they flow off the keys.
You gave me these words, so I'll make you some trees.
I'll show you the result, I will show you the way.
You made this path, the one that I walk on each day.
You chose my future, by helping my present.
You are the reasons that I don't resent.
To all of you, I love what you have done.
You may not know this, but I have yet begun.
For something like this, will never be written down.
I write as I go, for ink is no good if the paper is brown.
So I save my breath, and I only reveal this to you.
Something special, something that is new.
A couple of minutes, my mindless rant.
But you gave me courage, and I'll never say "can't"
Thank you so much.


The author's comments:
I didn't think this out, nor did I write it down. I typed this as I went over the course of about 3 minutes. Thank you to those who encourage me. I love you.

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on Jun. 24 2013 at 6:17 pm
-Hopeless- GOLD, Hudson, Indiana
16 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The lines that have no rhyme, are the ones that mean the most&quot; -Me-<br /> <br /> &quot;Are you with me, or will you fall to your knees?&quot; - We came as romans-

Lexus! Lexus! Lexus! I have been trying to reply to all the comments you left me. I didn't get notified of most. I was really sad to find out I neglected you. After I found what you wrote me, I couldn't help but write this to show my gratitude. I'm so glad you love my writings (:

on Jun. 24 2013 at 1:35 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Hopeless! Hopeless! Hopeless! SO long I have waited for new work from you! It's so refreshing to read more of your wonderful work. Honestly, it's really nice. As days pass I am finding more and more poems thanking the people of teenink and it makes me all the more glad that I've joined. I haven't just met people, but I've met friends. And you know that I've always loved your poems since the day I found your work. This poem is great, I love the metaphor of trees! Symbols! I love symbols and finding them in writing. You're such a good rhymer. I love this. As always, great job! And it's nice to see you back, though we only 'chat' through comments on your poems, it's always good to talk with people as kind and whole-hearted as you. -Your devoted reader, Lexus:)