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June 28, 2013
By Writingbee GOLD, Kirkland, Washington
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Writingbee GOLD, Kirkland, Washington
14 articles 21 photos 6 comments

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Live for today, love for tomorrow, and laugh at all your yesterdays. Never regret the past, always hope for the future, and cherish every moment you have.

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Flowers bloom bright and soft
Delicate as a blade of grass
As soft as a baby lamb
You seem them bloom and grow
Wait for them to go
And when they stay you say
"thank you"

For you have spared them from heartbreak
They stayed through the storms
They stayed through sickness
With there beauty and soft touch
As they whisper to you in the wind
"I'll stay"

© Lindsay T., Vernon, TX

The author's comments:
I hope people realize that when someone loves you they wait for you to leave. When you love someone you let them go. They want you to stay and when you do you have spared them from heart break and they say thank you.
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Princess.Renda GOLD said...
on Jul. 9 2014 at 12:00 pm
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
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"All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust." --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

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Writingbee this is a really good poem! The message and imagry is amazing. Keep writing! :)
Uga10 SILVER said...
on Jun. 29 2014 at 10:55 am
Uga10 SILVER, Verbena, Alabama
5 articles 0 photos 13 comments

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Money grows on the tree of persistance!

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I think this is great, great detail and description. Check out mine if you want thanks!
Writingbee GOLD said...
on Jun. 24 2014 at 10:39 pm
Writingbee GOLD, Kirkland, Washington
14 articles 21 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for today, love for tomorrow, and laugh at all your yesterdays. Never regret the past, always hope for the future, and cherish every moment you have.

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Thank you! That means a lot!
TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 24 2014 at 3:47 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

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Very beautiful! I love how you picture life as a flower's lifetime and beauty. Great Job :P