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June 28, 2013
By Writingbee GOLD, Kirkland, Washington
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Writingbee GOLD, Kirkland, Washington
14 articles 21 photos 6 comments

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Live for today, love for tomorrow, and laugh at all your yesterdays. Never regret the past, always hope for the future, and cherish every moment you have.

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If I could tell you one word
That word would come out
If I could tell you one thing
That thing would come out
If I could see you one last time
I would give up saying that one thing

The day before I died
That one thing was
I love you

I love you
You are my whole world
I love you
You mean everything to me
I love you
Without you I am nothing

I love you
I need you
I hope you understand
Why seeing you meant more than telling you
I love you

© Melanie M., Hendersonville, TN

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The one thing I want you to take away from this is cherish what you have. You never know what you have till its gone. Then its to late.
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This article has 6 comments.

Sherlocklives SILVER said...
on Jul. 2 2014 at 2:24 pm
Sherlocklives SILVER, Mnt. Marion, New York
5 articles 15 photos 29 comments

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&quot;Among them, not of them&quot; ~Lord Byron<br /> <br /> &quot;I may be on the side of the angels, but don&#039;t think for one second that I *am* one of them.&quot; ~Sherlock

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powerful :) ouch
Writingbee GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2014 at 2:40 am
Writingbee GOLD, Kirkland, Washington
14 articles 21 photos 6 comments

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Live for today, love for tomorrow, and laugh at all your yesterdays. Never regret the past, always hope for the future, and cherish every moment you have.

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I'm glad the message came across. I am so glad you like it!
TaylorJLutz SILVER said...
on Jul. 2 2014 at 2:38 am
TaylorJLutz SILVER, Saginaw, Michigan
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I'm inspired and take away exactly what you wanted me to. You used poetry to inspire others and thats why I love this
TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 24 2014 at 3:51 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

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Really Nice. i do agree with you, we people tend to follow everyday's track and always eem to forget what's important in life. Who Knows?! maybe tomorrow will never come and then it will be too late. Anyways, I just loved it!
Writingbee GOLD said...
on Jun. 24 2014 at 3:13 pm
Writingbee GOLD, Kirkland, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Live for today, love for tomorrow, and laugh at all your yesterdays. Never regret the past, always hope for the future, and cherish every moment you have.

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Thank you very much!
CookieMonster24 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 24 2014 at 3:12 pm
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This is really sweet. I love how you put the words together. Great work. xo