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August 8, 2013
By CassandratheBitchyTrampoline BRONZE, New Malden, Other
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Tangled
This love is tangled
Like my earphones
Like your hair

We need someone with patience
(And long nails)
To sort it out

But you are impatient
And so am I
So we wait

And wait
(And wait)
But they do not come

© Elaine S., Phoenix, AZ

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CassandratheBitchyTrampoline BRONZE said...
on Aug. 27 2013 at 1:12 pm
CassandratheBitchyTrampoline BRONZE, New Malden, Other
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That's pretty cool! Thanks for reviewing!
AconiteAnn BRONZE said...
on Aug. 12 2013 at 1:10 pm
AconiteAnn BRONZE, Agoura Hills, California
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&quot;I loved you, so I drew these tides of men into my hands and wrote my will across the sky in stars.&quot; - T. E. Lawrence

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you have basically captured my situation right now exactly, it's kinda scary... Really good job!!!
tori-gurl PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 9 2013 at 10:19 pm
tori-gurl PLATINUM, Norwich, New York
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smile through everything no matter how bad it gets because it could be worse and if it gets worse well then it can only get better. :)

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No problem! :) And I am glad it is  
CassandratheBitchyTrampoline BRONZE said...
on Aug. 9 2013 at 2:05 pm
CassandratheBitchyTrampoline BRONZE, New Malden, Other
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;)          
sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 9 2013 at 1:18 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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this was so great! and if things end up sour, i suggest a sequal entitled "scissors" ;) Again, nice work!!!
CassandratheBitchyTrampoline BRONZE said...
on Aug. 9 2013 at 4:27 am
CassandratheBitchyTrampoline BRONZE, New Malden, Other
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Thanks so much! It's really encouraging.
tori-gurl PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 8 2013 at 10:51 pm
tori-gurl PLATINUM, Norwich, New York
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I like how you compare your love to things that tangle so easily and frequently. These examples really help you illustrate the purpose of your poem and I think that was done very well. I also enjoy how relatable this poem is to everyday life. Very well done!