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Waves and Flames

August 23, 2013
By TheMaskedPoet SILVER, Temple, Georgia
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TheMaskedPoet SILVER, Temple, Georgia
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"I wish I could be a little less dramatic, like a Kennedy when Camelot went down in Flames." -Miranda Lambert

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Waves and flames.
Opposites,
Yet a composed harmony.
Nature in tune
Never and forever.
Mortal enemies
But thrive side by side.
Waves and flames.

© Matt A., Smithfield, RI

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TheMaskedPoet SILVER said...
on Nov. 3 2013 at 1:32 am
TheMaskedPoet SILVER, Temple, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"I wish I could be a little less dramatic, like a Kennedy when Camelot went down in Flames." -Miranda Lambert

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Thanks so much for the review & for the kindness!!! :)
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 2 2013 at 10:27 am
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
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"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

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This is very clean and effective. The contrasts are clear from the beginning, and I like ow it all sort of loops around at the end. Keep writing!
TheMaskedPoet SILVER said...
on Oct. 31 2013 at 9:34 pm
TheMaskedPoet SILVER, Temple, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I wish I could be a little less dramatic, like a Kennedy when Camelot went down in Flames." -Miranda Lambert

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Thank you!!!
MissExploration BRONZE said...
on Oct. 30 2013 at 11:29 pm
MissExploration BRONZE, Vancouver, Washington
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It Can Only Fly When It Needs To.

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Great simplicity of this poem. It flows nicely.
TheMaskedPoet SILVER said...
on Sep. 1 2013 at 8:50 pm
TheMaskedPoet SILVER, Temple, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"I wish I could be a little less dramatic, like a Kennedy when Camelot went down in Flames." -Miranda Lambert

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Thanks... I really am falling in love with this poem.
TheMaskedPoet SILVER said...
on Sep. 1 2013 at 8:50 pm
TheMaskedPoet SILVER, Temple, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"I wish I could be a little less dramatic, like a Kennedy when Camelot went down in Flames." -Miranda Lambert

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Thank you!!!!!!!
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 1 2013 at 7:55 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
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Nice job! I like this i think tht it really is playful yet serious and completely awesome. 4/5 :) keep rockin
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Sep. 1 2013 at 9:45 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Simple, but strong. Love it. I like the duality about it, and the relationship between two opposite but harmonious things. 5/5 :)
TheMaskedPoet SILVER said...
on Aug. 31 2013 at 12:10 am
TheMaskedPoet SILVER, Temple, Georgia
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&quot;I wish I could be a little less dramatic, like a Kennedy when Camelot went down in Flames.&quot; -Miranda Lambert

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Thanks Mckay!
Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 30 2013 at 5:50 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Don't fret. Insane poems are the best. I like how these two opposite forces of nature work in harmony in this poem. I like the rhythm of it. Nicely done. 
TheMaskedPoet SILVER said...
on Aug. 29 2013 at 11:16 pm
TheMaskedPoet SILVER, Temple, Georgia
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&quot;I wish I could be a little less dramatic, like a Kennedy when Camelot went down in Flames.&quot; -Miranda Lambert

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Ill be completely honest and say I was unure on if this poem was amazing or insane, but I've gotten amazing reviews, ratings, etc. on this one and now I'm super excited about it. You have a really cool outlook on it. Thanks!
Netnel GOLD said...
on Aug. 29 2013 at 11:15 pm
Netnel GOLD, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
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I think it flows very well and I like how the two forces are equal while other nature poems tend to show fire as either weak or evil