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Love Is Just A Lie

October 18, 2013
By mynameisnothabib GOLD, Quinlan, Texas
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&quot;One idea lights a thousand candles&quot;<br /> ~Ralph Waldo Emerson

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It was just a feeling,
A thing of the past
Some people say it's love
But it will never last

I still remember when we met,
It just felt so right
Now you'll never know
How much I cry at night.

I see everyone you know,
But I'll never let it show
The pain inside my eyes,
Every time I sigh.

I used to have it all.......

But Love Is Just A Lie

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

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MissExploration BRONZE said...
on Nov. 3 2013 at 1:45 am
MissExploration BRONZE, Vancouver, Washington
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The poem flows great and rhymes! But it's a little cliche to other poems I have read. (I don't mean to sound rude.) I like the style that it is short and sweet. 
SpidersAcrossStars PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 23 2013 at 9:57 pm
SpidersAcrossStars PLATINUM, Hayward, California
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2/5 This poem has a nice flow to it but its kinds "been there, done that" you know? It is just too cliche for me. I like the title and think this has a lot of potential. My advice is to rewrite it and maybe add some personal touches to it and change it up a bit. Love is a topic that has been done a lot and will continue to be done a lot in the future. (I mean, its a great topic) but that doesn't mean it has to get old. Take a topic that has been done before and make it new, make it yours, and you can create something beautiful but different from everything else. If you decide to rewrite it, please let me know. I would love to read it and see what you came up with :)