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The Oblivious Avenger

October 21, 2013
By TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
45 articles 2 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;When it&#039;s over, I want to say: all my life<br /> I was a bride married to amazement.<br /> I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms. <br /> <br /> When it is over, I don&#039;t want to wonder<br /> if I have made of my life something particular, and real.<br /> I don&#039;t want to find myself sighing and frightened,<br /> or full of argument. <br /> <br /> I don&#039;t want to end up simply having visited this world.&rdquo;


You are gifted with the fake perception of hope,
Planted right in the center of your hearts,
Precisely where it constantly beats,
To the tiniest sound you make,
And the most unheard muted whispers during the darkest days,
Your sinister laughter broke the silent hopes within us,
As a smirked emerged from you crimson lips,
You can obliviously tell the world,
How you shattered our precious dreams,
As you bleed into my souls,
Regarding those unsightly truth hidden within,
You'd grabbed those enmity in your burning fists,
And crushed it in those ragged scarred palms,
Why'd you retain this ugly desire?
Wouldn't you stop and let it go?
This avenge of yours,
Is gonna breath you in atrociously,
Just like he embed those diabolic angel in your wraith,
Stop that raze and those harsh tears,
And those dithering sketchy fears,
Silently, they will all dissappear,
In a luminous light of sheer veracity,
La paix doit vous la façon conduit,
Et l'amour conserve,
I believe, it always will..
As someday you'll eventually hit the ground,
And drowned yourself in these theatrical ballad,
Thus, you'll be returning to our bosom of rose,
car ce n'est pas votre vie..



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on Dec. 7 2013 at 7:20 am
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
45 articles 2 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;When it&#039;s over, I want to say: all my life<br /> I was a bride married to amazement.<br /> I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms. <br /> <br /> When it is over, I don&#039;t want to wonder<br /> if I have made of my life something particular, and real.<br /> I don&#039;t want to find myself sighing and frightened,<br /> or full of argument. <br /> <br /> I don&#039;t want to end up simply having visited this world.&rdquo;

Thank you Shadow!!! And yes, i have a few typos there and thanks once again for correcting it! I'll avoiding making the same mistake twice :)

.king. SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2013 at 11:43 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 569 comments

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There are a few mistakes like 'My souls' I think you  meant 'soul' , but over all I like the way you describe the deep feelings , couldn't have done better! :D