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IDentity
October 23, 2013
She knows not,
Who she truly is;
Her identity...
Passed around too much
to care anymore
But still,
She wonders,
Who Am I??
People seem to think
They know her.
It's highly improbable
That they do,
For she knows not
Who She Truly Is.....
© Krystal B., Bloomingdale , IL
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mynameisnothabib GOLD said...
on Nov. 4 2013 at 9:47 am
what i meant was living from home to home, place to place. i never stayed around in one city for too long. moving from grandparents to parents to mom's boyfriend to stepdad to a childrens home. now im here and its as simple as that. i just am.
MissExploration BRONZE said...
on Nov. 3 2013 at 1:48 am
Your poems all have this natural rhythm in it. It works great. I get confused in the lines "Her identity..../Passed around too much/to care anymore/" then it jumps. I am not sure what you mean by "passed around too much". Other than that, great work!
DarknessHasFallen GOLD said...
on Nov. 2 2013 at 8:45 pm
This poem ia amazingly well written... This is a great piece and just keep writing!!
LaChouette GOLD said...
on Oct. 31 2013 at 6:43 pm
This is pretty good! Your grammar and spelling is consistent which is good. I will say that I was confused by the first stanza. I understand the part where you say she doesn't know who she is but the next part about her identity confuses me. Who exactly doesn't care anymore and what do they not care about? It might be me just misinterpreting what you're saying. Other than that, I think it's a good job overall!
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