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the lost girl

October 24, 2013
By jacey_poo BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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jacey_poo BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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never judge a book by its cover

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i left my phone on the counter and stared at it, wondering if he will ever tell me lies again, wondering will he ever come and see me.. why should he, all i ever get is the feeling of blue. i could never get him out of my mind until he fades standing outside the lines and it wont be good because he wont ever see me again until i tell him he is worth getting another shot and it wont be soon... doors close and open waiting for the opportunity but it never comes i will hurt the day that it comes

© Dana D., Gansevoort, NY

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what inspired me was i was left and never thought of and then a month or so later i was remembered and i was debating wheather to be taken back but i chose to close that door and then open it but i finally closed it and waited to see if another day like that will come
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Nightowlwriter BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2014 at 10:48 pm
Nightowlwriter BRONZE, Garden City, Georgia
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This was swesome! Write some more please!
Nobuo GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2014 at 2:39 pm
Nobuo GOLD, Dio, Missouri
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I like this
IndieChick10 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 18 2014 at 10:36 pm
IndieChick10 BRONZE, Berkeley Springs, West Virginia
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&ldquo;If I am not for myself, then who will be for me? And if I am only for myself, then what am I? And if not now, when?&rdquo;-Rabbi Hillel

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Nice wright chica!  
themajesticpoet BRONZE said...
on Apr. 17 2014 at 8:45 pm
themajesticpoet BRONZE, Bloomington, Other
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This is really good!  I love the feeling in it and how the emotion changes is great....  Keep up the writing!!!
GhostMatrix SILVER said...
on Apr. 17 2014 at 8:42 pm
GhostMatrix SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
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I Liked it.     Whats it about?     It really Shook at my heart.         Good Work.             Keep Writing.