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November 1, 2013
By Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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I fall.
I write.
I rise.
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© Patricia G., Phoenix, AZ

The author's comments:
I think this one's relatable to all us writers , we fall, and we float on drops of ink, again.
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This article has 21 comments.

TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2014 at 8:11 pm
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD, Irvine, California
13 articles 1 photo 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn&#039;t measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments which take your breath away.<br /> <br /> You are only as strong as your weakest link.

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This is great! It's so simple, but so true! :) I also love the movement of falling and rising: beautiful!
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 25 2014 at 10:43 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

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This is amazing! So true! So relatable! just wow!!! 
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 22 2014 at 2:06 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1136 comments

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I&#039;ve learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel. <br /> - Maya Angelou <br /> When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn&rsquo;t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out<br /> The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay<br /> If love produced a blossom/I&rsquo;d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I&rsquo;d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven<br /> And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

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I got one interjection for ya: wow!!
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 6 2014 at 10:34 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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Thank you so much!
Metalhead36 SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2014 at 8:33 pm
Metalhead36 SILVER, Amherst, Massachusetts
8 articles 0 photos 23 comments

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Words have no power to impress the mind without the exquisite horror of their reality. - Edgar Allan Poe

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I love this. It's simple. 6 words, delivers such a powerful message, this is one of the finest poems I've read. Well done.
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 17 2013 at 8:04 pm
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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Thank you so much!
411Ellie PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 17 2013 at 8:00 pm
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Paper is more patient than people.&quot; &ndash;Anne Frank

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The cycle of a poet summed up in 6 words. Beauty in its simplicity :)
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 16 2013 at 10:51 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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Thanks a LOT unicorn!
HornyUnicorn69 said...
on Nov. 16 2013 at 9:09 am
True. Simplicity in its most complex and meanigful form. Great job
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 16 2013 at 6:20 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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That was the exact thing in my mind when I wrote this piece! You have no idea how happy you just made me :)
RozaAlexander said...
on Nov. 15 2013 at 8:29 pm
RozaAlexander, Amory, Mississippi
0 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
rumors are carried by haters, spread by fools, &amp; accepted by idiots.

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simplicity and complexity in one poem, beautiful genius
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 14 2013 at 6:51 pm
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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Thanks! Hearing that means a lot! :)
PoeticStranger SILVER said...
on Nov. 14 2013 at 8:41 am
PoeticStranger SILVER, Battle Creek, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.&quot;<br /> ~Edgar Allan Poe

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Ray, this is a fantastic piece. I have read this poem before by you, but for some reason, never commented on it. I absolutely love this!
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 10 2013 at 9:35 pm
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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Thanks a lot :)
Angel-freed PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 10 2013 at 9:02 pm
Angel-freed PLATINUM, Dallas City, Illinois
20 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is our true meaning, so show it. Don&#039;t be sad because its over, be happy because it happened. -Dr. Seuss; &quot;Pooh will we be friends forever?&quot; asked Piglet, &quot;Even longer.&quot; Pooh replied. -Winnie the Pooh

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I dig it  
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 8 2013 at 5:17 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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Thanks!! Glad you too are a fan of simplicity :D
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 8 2013 at 5:15 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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I'm really glad you found it relatable. Thanks a lot!
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 8 2013 at 5:13 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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Thanks!! It feels really nice to get actually genuine comments :)  I'll surely will take care of it the next time I write, thanks!
KaylaaLovee GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2013 at 1:46 pm
KaylaaLovee GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
14 articles 1 photo 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Imperfection is beauty. Madness is genius. And its better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring. And when it comes down to it, I let them think what they want. If they care enough to bother with what I do, I&#039;m already better than them.&quot;

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Simple=Perfection <33
FlyingKite BRONZE said...
on Nov. 5 2013 at 9:01 am
FlyingKite BRONZE, Loveland, Ohio
4 articles 2 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Liar liar pantalones de fuego! -Phineas and Ferb

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It's deep, but you schould elaborate more on what it means, and what you are trying to say! Good work!