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Don't Go

December 4, 2013
By KassandraThough GOLD, Bridgeport, Texas
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"I will destroy you in the most beautiful way possible and when im finished, you will finally understand why storms are named after people."

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I’m afraid to reply
When you text me
In the middle of the
Night, because you
Learned my secrets
I opened up
And I’m afraid
That you’ll ask
Me what happened.
Or why I am this way
And then you’ll
Leave. just like
Every body
Else.

© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico

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Butterflies93 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2014 at 11:28 am
Butterflies93 BRONZE, Strafford, New Hampshire
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I love the idea of this poem.  I think removing the 'Me' in line 9 could make that particular piece of the poem slightly more effective?  Also, maybe play with the punctuation a bit?  I like the beginning the way it is though (without the punctuaion) because I read it faster and it's really good that way.  8]  Nice!  
Myvoice4change SILVER said...
on Jan. 17 2014 at 4:51 pm
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Wow, actually I've been feeling like this lately! Well written! You have a good rhythm scheme  and I like how the lines get smaller towards the end until there's only one word!