Don't Go | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. Don't Go

Don't Go

December 4, 2013
By KassandraThough GOLD, Bridgeport, Texas
More by this author
KassandraThough GOLD, Bridgeport, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will destroy you in the most beautiful way possible and when im finished, you will finally understand why storms are named after people."

View profile

I’m afraid to reply
When you text me
In the middle of the
Night, because you
Learned my secrets
I opened up
And I’m afraid
That you’ll ask
Me what happened.
Or why I am this way
And then you’ll
Leave. just like
Every body
Else.

© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Brother
By Anonymous
Poetry
Different
By sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM
West Jordan, Utah
sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM, West Jordan, Utah
31 articles 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
Poetry
The Top
By imperfection GOLD
Gilroy, California
imperfection GOLD, Gilroy, California
17 articles 9 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Dream as though you&#039;ll live forever, live as though you&#039;ll die today.&quot;<br /> ~James Dean (1931-1955), American Motion Picture Actor, symbol of rebellion

View profile
Poetry
Summer Day
By Lost-In-Life GOLD
Whitby, Other
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s never to late, if it weren&#039;t for the last minute many things would never get done!

View profile
Poetry
Alice
By Keasbey GOLD
La Habra Heights, California
Keasbey GOLD, La Habra Heights, California
12 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I will no longer pray on my knees, to a god who&#039;s left me so many times. I will no longer pray on my knees, to a god who won&#039;t answer my call.&quot;

View profile
Poetry
The Moon
By Izzy Hare BRONZE
Camano Island, Washington
Izzy Hare BRONZE, Camano Island, Washington
2 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.

Butterflies93 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2014 at 11:28 am
Butterflies93 BRONZE, Strafford, New Hampshire
2 articles 0 photos 10 comments
View profile
I love the idea of this poem.  I think removing the 'Me' in line 9 could make that particular piece of the poem slightly more effective?  Also, maybe play with the punctuation a bit?  I like the beginning the way it is though (without the punctuaion) because I read it faster and it's really good that way.  8]  Nice!  
Myvoice4change SILVER said...
on Jan. 17 2014 at 4:51 pm
Myvoice4change SILVER, Other, Other
9 articles 3 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything will be ok in the end. If it&#039;s not okay, it&#039;s not the end.&quot;

View profile
Wow, actually I've been feeling like this lately! Well written! You have a good rhythm scheme  and I like how the lines get smaller towards the end until there's only one word!