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December 9, 2013
By Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

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&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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The world came to its
End
But there was no eclipse or any
Earthquakes,
The only trembling was your fingers
on my skin like
You were tapping out Morse
Code
That only I could hear,
And in our snow globe of a world,
the end was
Binding in its iso-
Lation,
Because united we conquer, but divided
We fall,
And we couldn’t merge our multifarious
Perspectives,
And I never did translate your
Dot-dot-dot
I thought it spelled out “eclipse” when it
Was an ellipsis, you
Wanted
A “to be continued” when I was
Saying
“The End.”

© Alexandra T., Chelsea, MI

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Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Oct. 27 2016 at 1:52 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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Thank you so much!
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Oct. 27 2016 at 1:51 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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Hey! Thanks, I honestly didn't know this was published until now lol. I separated it to "isolate" the word, haha. Nice to hear from you again!
Mckay ELITE said...
on Feb. 16 2015 at 8:51 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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I saw the link of the TI Facebook Activity section of the page. (Congrats not only on the Editor's Choice, publication, and being shared on Facebook!) You've got big things coming your way in the literary/art world. You captured the emotion and image of modern relationships with your flawless wording. Images and metaphors were/ARE immaculate. 10/10
SCSKATE SILVER said...
on Feb. 15 2015 at 12:42 pm
SCSKATE SILVER, Austin, Texas
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loved the last 2 lines!
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 13 2015 at 5:41 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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&quot;Never fear shadows. They simply mean there&#039;s a light shining somewhere nearby.&quot; - Unknown

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Jade, I haven't seen you on in forever!! Congratulations on being published! I love the way you write, and I always have. (: One question, why'd you separate the word "isolation" onto two separate lines? Honestly, I'm just curious. Nonetheless, awesome job as usual. (:
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 10 2015 at 7:34 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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The editors shared this, and it is clear why. Beautiful writing, Jade. Congratulations!
freeperson DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 18 2013 at 3:42 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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&quot;Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?&quot; - Ara Weston

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Lo Siento Chica :( 
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Dec. 18 2013 at 11:48 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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You were right :P it's about a breakup
TargonTheDragon GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2013 at 10:31 am
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
15 articles 16 photos 292 comments

Favorite Quote:
First dentistry was painless.<br /> Then bicycles were chainless,<br /> Carriages were horseless,<br /> And many laws enforceless.<br /> <br /> Next cookery was fireless,<br /> Telegraphy was wireless,<br /> Cigars were nicotineless,<br /> And coffee caffeineless.<br /> <br /> Soon oranges were seedless,<br /> The putting green was weedless,<br /> The college boy was hatless,<br /> The proper diet fatless.<br /> <br /> New motor roads are dustless,<br /> The latest steel is rustless,<br /> Our tennis courts are sodless,<br /> Our new religion &mdash; godless.

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Jade-  well i am glad i can get a straight answer from you-_-
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Dec. 17 2013 at 6:31 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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You're so right you're wrong
TargonTheDragon GOLD said...
on Dec. 17 2013 at 10:21 am
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
15 articles 16 photos 292 comments

Favorite Quote:
First dentistry was painless.<br /> Then bicycles were chainless,<br /> Carriages were horseless,<br /> And many laws enforceless.<br /> <br /> Next cookery was fireless,<br /> Telegraphy was wireless,<br /> Cigars were nicotineless,<br /> And coffee caffeineless.<br /> <br /> Soon oranges were seedless,<br /> The putting green was weedless,<br /> The college boy was hatless,<br /> The proper diet fatless.<br /> <br /> New motor roads are dustless,<br /> The latest steel is rustless,<br /> Our tennis courts are sodless,<br /> Our new religion &mdash; godless.

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Jade- so does that mean i was right?
freeperson DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 16 2013 at 4:50 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
59 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?&quot; - Ara Weston

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Yeah, but whatev the prob was was very well disguised. Love :)
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Dec. 16 2013 at 1:49 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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Umm yeah :P
TargonTheDragon GOLD said...
on Dec. 16 2013 at 10:38 am
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
15 articles 16 photos 292 comments

Favorite Quote:
First dentistry was painless.<br /> Then bicycles were chainless,<br /> Carriages were horseless,<br /> And many laws enforceless.<br /> <br /> Next cookery was fireless,<br /> Telegraphy was wireless,<br /> Cigars were nicotineless,<br /> And coffee caffeineless.<br /> <br /> Soon oranges were seedless,<br /> The putting green was weedless,<br /> The college boy was hatless,<br /> The proper diet fatless.<br /> <br /> New motor roads are dustless,<br /> The latest steel is rustless,<br /> Our tennis courts are sodless,<br /> Our new religion &mdash; godless.

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i get the strange feeling of a breakup hereO.o