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December 26, 2013
By LexxRose SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
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LexxRose SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s not gonna easy. It&#039;s gonna really hard. We&#039;re gonna to work at this every day, but I want to do that because I want you. I want all of you, forever, you and me, every day...&quot;<br /> -Noah, The Notebook-

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The truth is you destiny
The lies are corrupt
The fears are released
The love is captured
The wisdom is revised
The life is renewing
The space is everlasting
The hate is reviewed
The glory fading
The shame relived
The peace is broken
The thought reused
It is always happening whether or not we want it to

© Ashley W., Port Charlotte, FL

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ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on May. 12 2014 at 3:38 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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This is really cool. MAkes you think.
Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Mar. 24 2014 at 3:37 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them.&quot;<br /> Henry David Thoreau<br /> <br /> &quot;I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once.&quot;<br /> John Green

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I think this is a beautiful poem. Your wording is elegant, and my favorite part is the truth of this line: "It is always happening whether or not we want it to." Great job with this! :)
LexxRose SILVER said...
on Mar. 22 2014 at 7:54 pm
LexxRose SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s not gonna easy. It&#039;s gonna really hard. We&#039;re gonna to work at this every day, but I want to do that because I want you. I want all of you, forever, you and me, every day...&quot;<br /> -Noah, The Notebook-

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Thank you for saying that my poem is better than okay. I appreciate your time reading and commenting(:
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 21 2014 at 9:10 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

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This is more than "an ok poem"! I enjoyed this very much! Nice use of words:) 
9spaceking PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 8 2014 at 3:23 pm
9spaceking PLATINUM, Chantily, Virginia
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&quot;Tragedy is when I cut my finger, comedy is when you fall into a sewer hole and die.&quot;

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meh. It's an ok poem, I guess.