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Dreams

December 31, 2013
By Janagirl SILVER, Westbloomfield, Michigan
Janagirl SILVER, Westbloomfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"shoot for the moon even if you miss you'll land amoung the stars"-brown "this world will always try to break you, all you need is the strength to break it back"


I'm floating with water all around
Its just me and there's not a sound
I'm still waiting am I ever going to be found
The bubbles float right in front of my face
Suddenly I hear a sound and my heart begins to race
The shadow I just saw vanished without a trace
I begin to look around all this empty space
I swim this way and that
But yet why do I still feel trapped
I heard a loud snap followed by a sudden crack
A wave hits me like a slap
The fish seem to be running
And I see the glimpse of the shadow once more
And I realize that keeping up with him is becoming quite the chore
I'm hoping to understand what is going on and I finally find the shadow to be a great blue whale
He floats so close I am able to see every scale
He leaves of trail of fishes and swirls
It's so pretty the way the waves curl around them
I see all the different colors and scenes
And suddenly I hear laughter ad screams
I wake to find that I was merely in a dream
I sit and think about all the things I saw
And as I dose off my mind begins to wander
For all I can hear is my steady breathing
And as the fear slowly releases me
I finally feel like I know what I've been missing
And for once I'm finally able to see
I cuddle back up and go to a place where illusions become reality
Back to my dreams where everything is never as it seems



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on Jan. 7 2014 at 1:56 am
Janagirl SILVER, Westbloomfield, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"shoot for the moon even if you miss you'll land amoung the stars"-brown "this world will always try to break you, all you need is the strength to break it back"

Thanks :) nhamo

Nhamo SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2014 at 8:12 pm
Nhamo SILVER, Hamilton, New Jersey
9 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
There isn't any beauty without any strangeness

I love this poem alot it reminds me of one of my own !! iTS REALLY GOOD

on Jan. 4 2014 at 1:02 pm
Janagirl SILVER, Westbloomfield, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"shoot for the moon even if you miss you'll land amoung the stars"-brown "this world will always try to break you, all you need is the strength to break it back"

Thanks girl :)

on Jan. 4 2014 at 12:52 pm
Simplyjessey BRONZE, Dillonvale, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself everyone else is taken.

Very good poem I love the flow of the words. c: