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S.A.I.L.B.O.A.T. (Acrostic)
February 5, 2014
Staggering out at sea,
An
Independent soul,
Like king of the waves,
But,
Other woeful times
Abducted
Tragically...
by the deep blue.
© Harrison L., Ruston, LA
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AmericaniumJ said...
on Jun. 19 2015 at 7:34 pm
I love how you break the rhythm at the end. I also love the disequilibrium in the editing style! Keep it up!
Shadow_hunter SILVER said...
on Nov. 19 2014 at 1:51 pm
it is just great and awesome and beautiful and creative and all wonderfull adjectives
midnightwoah said...
on Jul. 30 2014 at 2:41 pm
I saw what you did there! I want to write a poem in this format to about people putting words in my mouth. Hope to read more from you :>
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on May. 18 2014 at 2:41 pm
really Great! XP
sillywabbit BRONZE said...
on Apr. 30 2014 at 2:54 pm
I lreally liked this
Shadow_Wolf GOLD said...
on Mar. 3 2014 at 2:53 pm
Amazing Wonerful Exciting
raya150 said...
on Feb. 26 2014 at 4:16 pm
tha was great impressive
AloneandFree SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2014 at 4:01 pm
i like that you did a great job. and yes it reminded me of that tsunami, that took many lives. sometimes i wonder why the sea has to do taht but i guess it does get angry sometimes. :/
compassion GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2014 at 6:51 am
This reminded me of the tragic tsunami that swept away precious lives. Good composition.
PhoenixTears GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2014 at 11:52 pm
I really liked how you used the acrostic format, but conveyed such emotion and meaning into those words. Great job, and keep it up!
MattMattHatter PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 18 2014 at 1:12 pm
Short, yet amazing. I love the last line at the end outside the acrostic part it makes it very powerful :)
xxMedievalShadexx GOLD said...
on Feb. 16 2014 at 3:05 pm
That was awesome ;o
Promethean SILVER said...
on Feb. 15 2014 at 12:46 pm
short and wonderfull
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Feb. 14 2014 at 4:35 pm
I really like this. Its beautiful.
Comments are appreciated! :D