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Invisible

February 13, 2014
By ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran


I am invisible.
A chameleon.
A criminal.
I am invisible.
Blending into the night.
Going out like a light.
I am invisible.
Unnoticed.
Unloved.
I am invisible.
Nobody sees the knife.
As it pierces my skin
I am invisible.
Sitting in the corner.
Forlorn, forgotten.
I am invisible.
No matter how I try.
I simply can not go.
I am invisible.
My own blade can not see.
The pain inside of me.
I am invisible.
You can only see.
The monster inside.
Fighting to be free.


The author's comments:
Pretty self explanatory I'd say...
This is about my life...

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on Nov. 11 2014 at 1:49 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

Thank you!

on Mar. 20 2014 at 8:07 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

You have!!

on Mar. 20 2014 at 8:05 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

Sad and powerful! I wish I could make you feel better!

on Mar. 4 2014 at 10:49 am
JacobTheOrdinary PLATINUM, Rancho Cucamonga, California
43 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Fiction is the lie that tells the truth.&quot;

I like this piece because it feels completely relatable. Everyone feels like that at some point. Great work.

on Feb. 27 2014 at 12:27 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

Thank youi! Most of my pieces are sad

.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 22 2014 at 12:34 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 569 comments

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Very deep emotions here, it's sad in my opinion, but greatly written; Keep up the great work! C: