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February 15, 2014
By Promethean SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Promethean SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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An eye for an eye will make the whole world blind....

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What is true
When nothing is false

What is real
When nothing is Virtual

Why so curiosity
Why so eagerness

To search it
To get it
To Gain it, WHY?

Truth, reality,
No one knows
And so I

But I feel
These two be found

Which way to go
I don't know
And so I am still searching...

© Tim K., La Crosse, WI

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False, virtual may be same but still are too different...and Comments are highly appreciated. Please rate it, please.
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Promethean SILVER said...
on Mar. 3 2014 at 2:22 pm
Promethean SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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I am basically comparing them. 
Shadow_Wolf GOLD said...
on Mar. 3 2014 at 1:36 pm
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&quot;Love is not opening your eyes but opening your heart.&quot;<br /> &quot;You see not with your eyes, But with your heart.&quot;<br /> &quot;Think first with your heart not your head.&quot;<br /> &quot;If it has a heart, It is human.&quot;

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Looks good, just a little confused by it's meaning... other than that Great
Crystallite BRONZE said...
on Mar. 2 2014 at 12:21 pm
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it sounds realy good!
Harri SILVER said...
on Feb. 28 2014 at 11:58 am
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I had a hard time finding it's rythm and I don't exactly know what you were going for with this piece...but maybe that's just me. The bones of the it were good but it needs a little work. Nice job though!! 
Promethean SILVER said...
on Feb. 26 2014 at 1:01 am
Promethean SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Thanks... alot.....
.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 25 2014 at 9:24 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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This is nice, I like the massage and tone.. though it seems to be missing a few words at some places.. but overall I say it's Great; Keep it up! :)