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February 15, 2014
By mynameisobel PLATINUM, Collingswood, New Jersey
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You can not be brave if only good things have happened to you.

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like a whisper
you came
and piloted
my brain.
like thunder
you shook my soul
sending me whirling
away

© Sarah M., Blairsville, PA

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TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 24 2014 at 10:39 am
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

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Simple, mystifying, and purely impressive. I love te length, the diction, the metaphors, similes, everything about this. I also love the picture choice, but it made me imagine that it was the person's own conscience taking over her, not another person. Maybe that's what you meant? I don't know. But I loved it nonetheless.