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February 18, 2014
By ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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Smoothly sailing
Cross the ocean blue
Serenely gliding
Cross the raging seas

Tossed to and throe
But stands 'gainst the waves
Fighting to say afloat

The wind throws it about
Yet pushes it forward
as the waves pull it back

Beautiful is the monster tamer
The monster roars
the monster fights
And yet the tamer cracks the whip

Monster scared into submission
Yet on the inside
the storm rages on

© Megan S., Marblehead, MA

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ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Nov. 11 2014 at 1:51 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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yea... it was a bit random
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Nov. 11 2014 at 1:51 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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Thanks. Yea...
Harri SILVER said...
on Mar. 8 2014 at 3:40 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
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Not bad, Rose! Though maybe next time try to use more than one word in your description. You use Monster a couple of times. Other wise, I love it!
jennag4 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 7 2014 at 9:22 pm
jennag4 PLATINUM, New City, New York
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really good! could be a little clearer but really crreative
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Mar. 1 2014 at 7:00 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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Okay... its cuz I was trying to make it more positive lol
.king. SILVER said...
on Mar. 1 2014 at 1:18 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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No, it's beautiful, the problem is that it seems to lack creativity, not much seems to happen in the 5 stanzas.. and at some points it's confusing; overall it's a fine piece! :)
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Feb. 25 2014 at 2:55 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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Wow... this was never my favorite poem... But 2/5 stars is sad... Maybe I should delete it...