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Freddy

March 7, 2014
By ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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I don't remember the color his eyes were,
and barely the sand in his hair
All the lines of his face are
becoming muddled
I have no picture to remember
My young lovers face

Only the charcoal pictures
I drew of his artful grace

He was different from most others
Always a smile on his face
Until one day he revealed
the pain lying deep within

Where is my lover?
Will he always be lost
Or might I see him one more day?
In heaven will we cross?

© Stephanie H., Highland Village, TX

The author's comments:
I met Freddy in a hospital. This past August he killed himself. He was the closest thing I ever felt to love. I don't understand why he left me. I was inspired to write this piece by my friend Shannon, who unknowingly reached into me, and made me feel again with her piece letters to Cameron. And admittedly those feelings were not pleasant. But they were good to feel.
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Nelly_Nell GOLD said...
on Nov. 21 2014 at 11:34 pm
Nelly_Nell GOLD, Bakersfield, California
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&#039;&#039; For every dark night there is an even brighter day&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Tupac Shukar

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oh my gosh this was a great poem. *hugs* this was sad but still very very good  
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Mar. 20 2014 at 8:05 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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No no... no tears
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 20 2014 at 8:01 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

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SO well written and sad! I am almost in tears now after reading it! (((huggg)))
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Mar. 12 2014 at 5:32 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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Okay... thank you Harro
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Mar. 12 2014 at 5:31 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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Thanks...........
Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Mar. 12 2014 at 5:30 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
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Rose... This was so good! And sad... *Hugs* But so amazing!
Harri SILVER said...
on Mar. 12 2014 at 5:29 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
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   It feels a little broken up and the flow is a little slow..but other wise the over all feeling was good. It needs more description, other wise it is just a standard poem about a boy. It needs something more striking.