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March 13, 2014
By ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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Silky smooth petals adorn the salient thorn
Yet if you look behind the grace you'll find the rose will scorn

Its easy to mistake me for something angelic
But if you look inside You'll find not much to relic

© Jeanette M., Phoenix, AZ

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Haha... those of you who truly know me will get this.
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itsyourmaingirl SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2014 at 10:55 pm
itsyourmaingirl SILVER, Flint, Texas
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this whole thing is amazing and very well written!
midnightwoah said...
on Nov. 23 2014 at 6:28 pm
midnightwoah, Monett, Missouri
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Great imagrey, it was like the rose was in my hand! I like how you used the first stanza to compare yourself to in the next. I think you should or can make this into a very nice haiku (2 or more of course) since you have so much rythmn and precise writting pattern here. Definatley a good double endenre, keep writing!
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Nov. 11 2014 at 1:54 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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Thank you!
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Nov. 11 2014 at 1:54 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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Thank you!
taliamaee BRONZE said...
on May. 28 2014 at 9:21 pm
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this is so pretty! i love the rhyme scheme, haha. it's written so beautifully and i can feel the emotion:)
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM said...
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I like how it's short, elagent and well worded, very nice.
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Mar. 20 2014 at 8:03 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Thank you so much!!!
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on Mar. 20 2014 at 7:58 pm
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this is a beautiful and deep poem! I love it!
ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Mar. 18 2014 at 12:52 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Thank you so much! I agree. I could have done better on the second half... Do you know how I can edit my pieces?
WinterRose76 SILVER said...
on Mar. 18 2014 at 11:44 am
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
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The first half of your poem is perfect. It flows extremely well and is beautifully written. The second part isn't as eloquent, but it's still amazingly good. I really like it!