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March 14, 2014
By theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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&quot;Can&#039;t keep my eyes from the circling sky,<br /> Tongue-tied and twisted<br /> Just an earth-bound misfit, I&quot;<br /> ~Pink Floyd<br /> <br /> &quot;Now is blessed<br /> The rest<br /> remembered &quot; <br /> <br /> ~Jim Morrison

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The touch of your fingertips,
Are rose petals brushing palms;
the serenity of your mercy

© Wajida S., Shrewsbury, MA

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theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2014 at 3:07 am
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
47 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Can&#039;t keep my eyes from the circling sky,<br /> Tongue-tied and twisted<br /> Just an earth-bound misfit, I&quot;<br /> ~Pink Floyd<br /> <br /> &quot;Now is blessed<br /> The rest<br /> remembered &quot; <br /> <br /> ~Jim Morrison

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Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :)
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2014 at 2:59 am
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
47 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Can&#039;t keep my eyes from the circling sky,<br /> Tongue-tied and twisted<br /> Just an earth-bound misfit, I&quot;<br /> ~Pink Floyd<br /> <br /> &quot;Now is blessed<br /> The rest<br /> remembered &quot; <br /> <br /> ~Jim Morrison

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Aww thank you. I worked really hard on this poem. I'm really glad you liked it. :)
WinterRose76 SILVER said...
on Apr. 5 2014 at 4:34 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
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Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

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Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. You've managed to pack so much meaning into three short lines. Well done!
KarateGirl11 said...
on Mar. 26 2014 at 10:02 pm
This poem is really good!