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My eyes

March 24, 2014
By 12gage PLATINUM, Genesee,
12gage PLATINUM, Genesee,
30 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;GODS OF WAR I CALL YOU, MY SWORD <br /> IS BY MY SIDE. <br /> I SEEK A LIFE OF HONR, FREE FROM <br /> ALL FALSE PRIDE. <br /> I WILL CRACK THE WHIP WITH A BOLD <br /> MIGHTY HAIL. <br /> COVER ME WITH DEATH IF I SHOULD <br /> EVER FAIL. <br /> &quot;GLORY, MAJESTY, UNITY <br /> HAIL, HAIL, HAIL. &quot;


My eyes
Are molded by
The dancing flames of the dammed


My hair
Was gathered
From the feathers
Of the dammed crows


My clothing was made out
Of the skin
Of man


And I shall never leave
This realm,
Because
I like it
Here

I walk in this realm


With the suffering
And pain of those
Who fall into darkness?


I’ll do so with who ever
Falls into the pits
Of suffering and the wells of fires


With each soul which falls into the darkness, I gain strength and power
And my will to stay here, strengths even more then before
Through the pains of countless souls
Already I’ am strong


Through the shadows of suffering and death I dance
To the tune of screaming and yelling of mankind
Slowly my mate joins me in the dance of suffering and death
Once again we dance together in the suffering of another world of mankind

Her eyes
Are made out of the
Oceans of blood she has created


Her hair
Was gathered from thousand
Tears of suffering and dying women


Her skin
Was made from
The skin of little children


Her dress
Was made from
The skies of snakes and lizards


As we dance and
Suffering follows so
Does death and pain of mankind


We dance until there is nothing left alive.


We’ll stay here
Because we like
It here and we’ll never leave this realm
Because we like it here and we are never leaving it.


The author's comments:
not really sure if this is a poem or a song? to be honest i think its both in a way.

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on Jul. 7 2014 at 8:24 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

What beauty must taint your heart? This is such a wonderful poem, it iswonderfully wicked.

on Jul. 7 2014 at 8:22 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
53 articles 40 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

AWESOME! Should be a published song  

on Apr. 30 2014 at 8:15 pm
GhostMatrix SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
6 articles 3 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Each Day To The Fullest. -Quote From Somewhere Else-<br /> <br /> I&#039;m Whatever You Want Me To Be - My Quote -

This was Captivating.       I really got hooked, and had to keep reading with-out stoping.             Good Work.             Keep Writing.

Sandusky said...
on Apr. 2 2014 at 5:56 pm
I agree with you SeeStars. A lot it is a wonderful poem.

Nintendude said...
on Apr. 2 2014 at 5:48 pm
NICE!!! DAT WAS AMAZAZING

Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Mar. 31 2014 at 5:13 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
3 articles 10 photos 196 comments
Wow, this was so captivating! Watch for spelling, though, haha. Otherwise, I agree, this would make either a wonderful song or poem! (: I really really like it!