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i fell in love with 2

March 30, 2014
By JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
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as i see you i see me
as you see me you see you
the feelings i felt
were always true

but as i look away
i see another me
but this time
its the more mature me

im very truly sorry
ive never loved
never wanted
never cared for
anyone
but you

now i see someone i truly love more
cause for me
he is more mature

he is the balance in my footing
i want to make him mine
he is the one
who makes my moon shine

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

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i fell in love with two people in my school.
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MattMattHatter PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2014 at 11:20 pm
MattMattHatter PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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&quot;Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn. &quot;<br /> Thomas Gray

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I like it!! Although I have to admit I found the last line funny. Do you know what people refer to as moonshine? :P You may wanna look it up
PhoenixTears GOLD said...
on May. 5 2014 at 10:11 pm
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Really great work here! I love it!!!
VartikaSingh GOLD said...
on May. 4 2014 at 2:38 pm
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nice poem. I liked it.
iimoeloveii GOLD said...
on Apr. 28 2014 at 6:20 pm
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Great work!!!!!!! True poetry
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE said...
on Apr. 23 2014 at 12:49 pm
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"Choose the second 'cause if you really loved the first then you wouldn't have fallen in love again."
dinks PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 22 2014 at 6:28 pm
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Very relatable!
freeday15 GOLD said...
on Apr. 21 2014 at 7:41 pm
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Falling in love with one person is complicated enough, but two?? Wow, that could be a problem! Good luck!
Hells_Will SILVER said...
on Apr. 17 2014 at 1:49 pm
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I know right!!
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on Apr. 11 2014 at 11:11 pm
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I hate when that happens..