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Sickness MAG
You wreak black
like nightfall.
You words are
dark and sharp.
You spear hearts
to see them bleed.
You run wild
with the sun
which so willingly
burns you.
Your harsh words
have never echoed
so clear and sound
with the wind.
Your words dug
gashes in the moon
and light the sky.
Dark looms and
has never hesitated.
We wonder why
© Anonymous
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i<3steven! said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 4:36 pm
me 2!!!!!!!!!!!
i<3steven! said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 4:36 pm
wow, that is really good, y'all should read my poem titled "GOODBYE"
i wrote it and i think you'll like it
i wrote it and i think you'll like it
DustyCheyanne<3 SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 2:19 pm
This is amazing (:
great job;
great job;
Moloctopus BRONZE said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 10:05 am
I really like the way this poem flows.
And the descriptiveness in it.
"You spear hearts to see them bleed." was my favorite line.
It was really good.
And the descriptiveness in it.
"You spear hearts to see them bleed." was my favorite line.
It was really good.
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 9:25 am
Its really good, kinda dark but it has a good flow. Good job!
bamboom212 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 2:57 pm
i agree with Vais. u really have an amazing talent for wording. awesome job. plz keep writing!
JessicaBuck GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 9:12 pm
this is one of the few poems i have really liked.. great job. keep it up
sportychick48 SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 8:18 pm
for some reason i can't write like that yet i think its bcuz i cant get the words down fast enough. but i love your poem and hope to see more of your work :)
MyriahShaleen said...
on Dec. 20 2009 at 8:43 pm
Great poem! I hope some of my stuff gets to be in the magazine
life_of_a_leaf PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 20 2009 at 6:39 pm
your words are very powerful. your true feelings were represented in this poem. nice!
francheeze88 SILVER said...
on Nov. 28 2009 at 3:41 pm
Wow. This is amazing
sany.lastflame PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 8:52 am
I lovethis poem its so good i like the meaning and the way you put hings:)
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 7:50 pm
Okay, now that i'm done replying to some people's comments i would like to say that this is really good! i like that line "You wreak black like nightfall." :D it's really good. this is so good i think i might explode!!! O.O well... i'ma gonna stop typing cuz i'm goonna go read some more of your work!! toodles!!
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