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April 3, 2014
By albaschirinzi BRONZE, Tirana, Other
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She was beautiful as the sunlight in the occident sky,
beautiful as she danced in the pouring rain showing her broken smile,
She had the ability to surprise me every day a little more,
getting to know her pretty face and delightful electric soul.
She walked in beauty in the darkest nights,
Everytime she laughed, all the stars unites.
We shined brighter than the starry sky above
every look I threw at her made me fall a bit more in love.

© Danielle L., League City, TX

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albaschirinzi BRONZE said...
on Apr. 22 2014 at 8:24 am
albaschirinzi BRONZE, Tirana, Other
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Thank you very much! Yes, I should probably change this, thank you also for the advice 
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on Apr. 18 2014 at 3:25 am
You're great at using vivid, detailed imagery. Your poem is absolutely amazing. Only thing - you used the word shined, where you should've probably used shone. But great job overall, I loved it.