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Blades Hurt Less

April 28, 2014
By PrinceLion GOLD, Oxnard, California
PrinceLion GOLD, Oxnard, California
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Favorite Quote:
"When you find a diamond, try to break it." ~ Prince


Don't take it and burn it,
It's fragile like yours,
I may be strong to kill,
But you can break it too.

It can shine and will emit,
It struggles on this course,
This, time, that makes ill,
My heart is fragile like you.

Strength you lack much,
But beauty you drown in,
Don't take my heart and burn,
I promise it's fragile more.

It can die, it can budge,
It can feel the night sin,
I feel pain, you have learned,
That I may fight but am sore.

So this I ask of you gently,
That you clean my wounds inside,
The ones in my heart bravely,
For those hurt more than a sword slice.

Or an arrow in the arm,
For the pain in my heart,
Burns more than cuts unarmed,
This your love may go far.


The author's comments:
Think about it. A man may be strong, but that doesn't mean his heart doesn't feel pain :( I speak for them all.

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on May. 5 2014 at 5:08 pm
Zaylie PLATINUM, Everett, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s not the kind, the kind you take about it&#039;s just the kind that rips the clothing off your mind.&quot; -Flyleaf <br /> &quot;You feet in the air, Your head on the ground Try this trick and spin it yeah Your head will colapse when there&#039;s nothing it in.&quot;-Pixies

I love it!

on May. 4 2014 at 11:47 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

This is well written and speaks to me! Probably speaks to most girls! I can say for myself, it seems like guys are always so tough and emotionless. So it really touches my heart when a guy is able to show whats inside and let tears fall freely! Great poem!