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Trapped Inside a box

April 28, 2014
By PoeticPrincess BRONZE, Jonesboro, Georgia
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Trapped inside a box, I feel
Trapped inside a box.
There is no more room to feel
There is no room to love

My heart is solid like a stone
It will not bend or break.
I’d rather keep myself closed off
Than love to hurt again

I do not want to love
I’d rather not receive
If I could stand back afar
I’d rather bleed and bleed.

Feeling has become so foreign
Love does not exist
To be alone is best for me
To be alone… it fits

To hurt crushes my inner being
To love is even worse
I’d rather live inside a box
Than hurt and hurt and hurt.

© Cerys W., Marblehead, MA

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PoeticPrincess BRONZE said...
on May. 14 2014 at 7:25 am
PoeticPrincess BRONZE, Jonesboro, Georgia
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Thank you everyone! Thanks Psuedonymous I always forget to stop being redundant, lol thanks for the tip I will definitly keep that in mind next time! Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! :)
Psuedonymous_Walsh said...
on May. 13 2014 at 8:42 pm
Psuedonymous_Walsh, Taylorsville, Utah
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Amazing! It leaves a suspensful aura, and gives an excellent image! I agree with _Zavery_ , it has a very claustrophobic feeling. The only comment I have is be careful of redundancy. There was a few lines/words that I felt were repeated one too many times. Other than that it was a beautiful piece! 
HudaZav SILVER said...
on May. 13 2014 at 4:48 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
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This piece elicits claustrophobia and suspense, very well written piece!
GhostMatrix SILVER said...
on May. 12 2014 at 12:13 pm
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This makes me feel closterfobic. But theres lots of emotion in this.         Good Work.         Keep Writing.