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April 28, 2014
By BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Hard work beats talent when talent fails to work hard."

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Sometimes he loves you,
Sometimes he hates you.
Sometimes you cruise your way through things,
Other times the whole world is against you.
A question you just knew the answer to,
A score you just managed to get,
When time runs out by just a second,
When you say the wrong thing by accident,
Just hope
That this time,
He will be there for you.

© Carollynn G., Hawthorne, NY

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BlurAngel GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2014 at 8:50 am
BlurAngel GOLD, Bexleyheath, Other
16 articles 16 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is an Emotion of strong Affection and Personal Attachment.....

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I LOVE this, its also soo TRUE
BestWritingByBrit GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 10:19 pm
BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hard work beats talent when talent fails to work hard."

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Thanks for your feedback!
BestWritingByBrit GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 10:19 pm
BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hard work beats talent when talent fails to work hard."

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Thanks!             
BestWritingByBrit GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 10:15 pm
BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hard work beats talent when talent fails to work hard."

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Thanks!           
BestWritingByBrit GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 9:59 pm
BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hard work beats talent when talent fails to work hard."

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thank you!
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 9:51 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

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amazing work
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 9:51 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

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i really liked this it sounds as though ur talking about a chance of different things happening  
BestWritingByBrit GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 12:48 pm
BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Hard work beats talent when talent fails to work hard.&quot;

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Thanks so much! I really appreciate it! :)
BestWritingByBrit GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 12:45 pm
BestWritingByBrit GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Hard work beats talent when talent fails to work hard.&quot;

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Thank you so, so much! It means a lot! :)
TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 5 2014 at 5:50 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

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So awesome !! I love this poem it's so true....Luck is an unfaithful friend that's what I think Great job keep writing and i'll keep checking on your work cuz you certainly have a talent
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jul. 4 2014 at 5:27 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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I like this, I especially like the fact that luck is a being :) Great job! XD
EnderBean BRONZE said...
on May. 15 2014 at 7:33 pm
EnderBean BRONZE, Anderson, South Carolina
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I enjoyed this one.