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May 11, 2014
By Cassie_Monroe BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Cassie_Monroe BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am trying to find myself. Sometimes that&#039;s not easy.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> &quot;Fear is stupid; So are regrets&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> &quot;It&#039;s better to be unhappy alone than unhappy with someone - so far.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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I can’t sleep
I am broken
Is it because of him?
Is it because I can’t get him off my mind?
Do I miss him?
Do I still have feelings?

Should I be feeling this way?
I know he doesn't feel the same way
Should I tell him how I feel?
Or should I just let it go?
I’m not sure what I should do

I miss the old times
Hanging out at my house
Watching scary movies
Cuddling, Holding Hands

Every hug
Every kiss
Every touch

I am fixed
Now I can sleep.

© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA

The author's comments:
My mind tells him to stay, but my heart tells him to leave.
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This article has 12 comments.

Cassie_Monroe BRONZE said...
on Sep. 13 2014 at 12:35 pm
Cassie_Monroe BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am trying to find myself. Sometimes that&#039;s not easy.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> &quot;Fear is stupid; So are regrets&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> &quot;It&#039;s better to be unhappy alone than unhappy with someone - so far.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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Why Thank You! It means alot!
Chloe99 said...
on Sep. 13 2014 at 12:33 pm
Chloe99, Stockton On Tees, Other
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
People only rain on your parade because their jealous of your sun and tired of their shade.

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Beautifully written! This poem is something i can realate to a lot and, i think, there is a lot of people out there that will feel the same. Good job!
Cassie_Monroe BRONZE said...
on Sep. 4 2014 at 3:11 pm
Cassie_Monroe BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am trying to find myself. Sometimes that&#039;s not easy.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> &quot;Fear is stupid; So are regrets&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> &quot;It&#039;s better to be unhappy alone than unhappy with someone - so far.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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Thank You ! It means alot :) I try my hardest to connect with others but everything I write about is from personal experience and how I feel about certain things. I really appreciate your opinion. I learn from others so you are really helping me! 
TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 4 2014 at 2:10 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

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&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

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Lol I like it how you started having struggle in sleeping but when you thought about your special moments with him, you fell asleep right away lol I can relate to that ^_^ Anyways! It was very well written like Emily said full of emotion and just honest and true. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing this. Definitely 5 stars :D
Cassie_Monroe BRONZE said...
on Sep. 4 2014 at 2:08 pm
Cassie_Monroe BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am trying to find myself. Sometimes that&#039;s not easy.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> &quot;Fear is stupid; So are regrets&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> &quot;It&#039;s better to be unhappy alone than unhappy with someone - so far.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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Thank You :)
Cassie_Monroe BRONZE said...
on Sep. 4 2014 at 2:05 pm
Cassie_Monroe BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am trying to find myself. Sometimes that&#039;s not easy.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> &quot;Fear is stupid; So are regrets&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> &quot;It&#039;s better to be unhappy alone than unhappy with someone - so far.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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Thank You for giving me your opinion! I am a very honest person and im full of emotions. Writing is my only coping skill to use when im angry, I don't like expressing my feelings. Writing lets me
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 4 2014 at 1:53 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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It's very well-written. I love how your honest in your poem. It's full of emotion and you. It's wonderful. I love it. It's a bittersweet experience. I can't say I know how you feel, because I'm not you and I don't think I've had this happened to me. But I've went through something rather similar. Thank you for sharing this! 
elycavill SILVER said...
on Sep. 4 2014 at 9:36 am
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
5 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Leave nothing but footprints,<br /> Take nothing but pictures,<br /> Kill nothing but time.

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I like it untangling it self, the poem, I mean. Good work! ;)
Cassie_Monroe BRONZE said...
on May. 15 2014 at 6:46 am
Cassie_Monroe BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am trying to find myself. Sometimes that&#039;s not easy.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> &quot;Fear is stupid; So are regrets&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> &quot;It&#039;s better to be unhappy alone than unhappy with someone - so far.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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Thank you so much :)
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on May. 14 2014 at 4:34 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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I like the POV you used, like you were thinkiong this. I really liked it. 5/5
Cassie_Monroe BRONZE said...
on May. 14 2014 at 9:44 am
Cassie_Monroe BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am trying to find myself. Sometimes that&#039;s not easy.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> &quot;Fear is stupid; So are regrets&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> &quot;It&#039;s better to be unhappy alone than unhappy with someone - so far.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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Thank you so much :)
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on May. 13 2014 at 10:31 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

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I reallly like how this poem flows from problem to solution..the ending really went well! Great work!