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His Metaphor

May 19, 2014
By ShadowPen GOLD, Mesa, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it&#039;s better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring.&rdquo; <br /> <br /> ― Marilyn Monroe

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It was in passing conversation
a compliment im sure
he turned around and smiled,
"You are a Good Morning Girl."
He didnt quite tell me
just what this implied
but the phrase brought a smile to my lips
and light to my eyes
In my mind flashed sunrises
the pinks in the sky
a cool glorious morning
which he described me by
A Good Morning Girl
he said, was I

© Mandi S., McKinney, TX

The author's comments:
It was summer. I meant to say 'I'm a good Mormon girl' but my phone changed it to 'good morning girl' and he's called me it ever sense.
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