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My Mistake

May 26, 2014
By Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
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Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
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&quot;If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them.&quot;<br /> Henry David Thoreau<br /> <br /> &quot;I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once.&quot;<br /> John Green

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These eyes tell lies.
Hope blinds me in the presence of you;
It fills me,
Until I can no longer
Accurately see.
Yes, you hid behind the hope
I so gratefully drank.
I laid my trust by your feet,
Naively, Ignorantly, Stupidly.

Big mistake.

© Brad S., Lecompton, KS

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EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 24 2014 at 12:24 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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I acn connect. I have done this to someone I had trusted so much, and might still be doing, but I can't help but do it. Because I love that person so much, and I don't mean loving romantically. The person is one of my parents, my parents are divorced. I loev this. You are such a talented person and writer, that you leave me in awe. Thank you for sharing this!
midnightwoah said...
on Jul. 6 2014 at 6:51 pm
midnightwoah, Monett, Missouri
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&quot;We accept the love we think we deserve.&quot; -Stephen Chbosky

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Different, you made me think of several eyes that look sweet but are actually devious. My favorite part was the last five words.
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jun. 30 2014 at 7:47 pm
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so emotional and relevant! I absolutely love the ending you added it was so powerful!   o^_^o
Luv4Ever SILVER said...
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I love the display of emotion by this piece!!!
HudaZav SILVER said...
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&quot;Nothing is impossible; the word itself says &#039;I&#039;m possible&#039;!&quot; -Audrey Hepburn

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This is short but descriptive and effectively portrays a big message. I really like this poem, great work!