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You Are My Everything

June 1, 2014
By Mikky_Ekko13 SILVER, Osseo, Minnesota
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Mikky_Ekko13 SILVER, Osseo, Minnesota
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"People may hate you for being different and not living by society's standards, but deep down, they wish they had the courage to do the same."

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“Do you like me?” I asked him.
His eyes went wide. “Is it obvious?”
I laughed nervously. “Yes.”
He slowly smiled.


***
“You are the most beautiful
girl I have ever met;
I don’t know how I lived
without you.”

“You don’t have to anymore.”
We held hands. His eyes were
as deep as the ocean and just
as blue as it.

“If I told you I love you on the
first date, would you call me
crazy? Or would you smile?”
I looked at him, smile growing.

“I can’t say…” I laughed.
“I have finally found someone
who understands me.” He
whispered softly in my ear.

“I don’t want to lose you,”
He continues. “You are my
everything.”

© Lauren G., Pompton Plains, NJ

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I figured out that he loved me just by his expressions.
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EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 27 2014 at 8:46 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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A very, very sweet poem. Though I think it would be better if someone told me they trulyloved me, after more than one date. But all in all, it is amazing, sweet, wonderful, and full of you and emotions. Thank you for sharing this!
Mikky_Ekko13 SILVER said...
on Aug. 12 2014 at 6:56 pm
Mikky_Ekko13 SILVER, Osseo, Minnesota
9 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People may hate you for being different and not living by society's standards, but deep down, they wish they had the courage to do the same."

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Thank you!! :D Means a lot to me
Mikky_Ekko13 SILVER said...
on Aug. 12 2014 at 6:55 pm
Mikky_Ekko13 SILVER, Osseo, Minnesota
9 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People may hate you for being different and not living by society's standards, but deep down, they wish they had the courage to do the same."

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:D Thanks!!!
TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 12 2014 at 6:53 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

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Sweet and soft poem ^_^ It brought tears to my eyes actually lol It's such a beautiful story. Great job and using the dialogue and picturing the scene. Keep writing and thanks for sharing this. Defenitly a 5 stars rating :D
Mikky_Ekko13 SILVER said...
on Aug. 10 2014 at 12:19 am
Mikky_Ekko13 SILVER, Osseo, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;People may hate you for being different and not living by society&#039;s standards, but deep down, they wish they had the courage to do the same.&quot;

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Thank you so much ;-; It means a lot to me
Crystallite BRONZE said...
on Aug. 5 2014 at 7:12 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
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sweet poem! nice. love it.
midnightwoah said...
on Aug. 5 2014 at 6:56 pm
midnightwoah, Monett, Missouri
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&quot;We accept the love we think we deserve.&quot; -Stephen Chbosky

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Seems like the senario we all would like to hear on their first date! For me, I'd prefer someone to tell me they love me after more times passed though :). Perfect picture to correspond your free verse!
Mikky_Ekko13 SILVER said...
on Aug. 5 2014 at 2:40 pm
Mikky_Ekko13 SILVER, Osseo, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;People may hate you for being different and not living by society&#039;s standards, but deep down, they wish they had the courage to do the same.&quot;

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Thank you :D
TheOceansBlackBird SILVER said...
on Aug. 5 2014 at 2:34 pm
TheOceansBlackBird SILVER, Richmond, California
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Favorite Quote:
One persons craziness is another persons reality<br /> -Tim Burton<br /> <br /> and then there&#039;s this one<br /> ╭&cap;╮（︶︿︶）╭&cap;╮

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This was really cute! It  kind of seemed like a short scene from a movie or play. The only small criticism i have is that in the sentence, 'His eyes were as deep as the ocean and just as blue as it." You could have cut out the "as it" ending and made is a much crisper sentence. "His eyes were as deep as the ocean and just as blue." or "His eyes where as deep and blue as the ocean." Otherwise, great work.