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June 13, 2014
By Hatchetlover4eva SILVER, Phillips, Maine
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Hatchetlover4eva SILVER, Phillips, Maine
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"We look forward to the time when the power of love will replace the love of power then will our world know the blessings of peace" William Ewart Gladstone

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I’m deep in this pit of grief, no one to help pull me out,
I have no heart, my veins are as dry as a desert having a drought,
Everyone hates me, ever sense I was little people turned their backs on me,
But that works because it has allowed me to become free from my own reality,
I have always been on my own my parents left when I was three,
I have grown to know no boundaries, I’m in this world alone.

© Brandi H., Huber Heights, OH

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TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 28 2014 at 8:36 pm
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I'm so sorry for you dear :( I can't say that I know how you feel but reading this poem gives me some kind of perspective. If you could only know how my life turned upside down with only a trip of two days. I thought i was the most cursed person on the planet but seeing those people made me realize that no one has a perfect life, we all have ups and downs. And this poem right now confirmes what i just learned from my trip. i really wish you all the best. I hope one day you'll get through all this ^_^