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Gloomy
June 13, 2014
This darkness is concealing my fate,
The demons inside screaming at me to die,
my heart is no more. Just replaced by hate,
Deep in this gloomy pit I know I should give up and not try,
I shouldn’t pray to this god who says I’ll always be to late,
Behind the eyes who have seen millions cry,
I’m going to leave this physical realm behind,
I don’t belong here in this meat suit locked here confined,
I’m going insane here with all of my pain,
I want to be just like you
But I’m to f***ed up in my mind It’s all cloudy about to rain,
I can’t tell what is what whats false from true.
© Matt F., Pierz, MN
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Hatchetlover4eva SILVER said...
on Aug. 11 2014 at 4:19 pm
thank you:) and it says god tells me im always too late, and i was trying to put an image into peoples mind of just having so much stuff ageinst me it would be so impossible even god says just to give up. idk when i wrote it thats what i was feeling at the time but when i re-read through the stuff I write there's many different ways you can interperate them.
concerning the poem, I think it's an amazing job. You really have a talent. Saying that God is always too late well actually you may be right but just so you know, all this life is about a fight, a battlefield and a test from high above. Everybody's life is hard in their own simple way but if all of us would give up this way i don't think the world will exist any more. Sorry if it's too painful but i'm just being honest Other than that just keep writing cuz you're a great writer ^_^
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