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Rhythm and Beat

June 17, 2014
By Bismah PLATINUM, Karachi, Other
Bismah PLATINUM, Karachi, Other
22 articles 1 photo 11 comments

A drum, taught and solid,
beats its own rhythm,
dancing through the city,
beaming with the victory of
luring everyone into its magic.

I feel it tugging,
pulling and pressing past
my guard.

Should I give in?

Or am I
my own drum,
designed to beat
its own rhythm?



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on Jul. 8 2014 at 5:04 pm
Bismah PLATINUM, Karachi, Other
22 articles 1 photo 11 comments
Thank you! I'm glad you could relate to my writing, and found it meaningful. If you have time, read my other writings on TI :)

on Jun. 19 2014 at 12:51 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

Rhythem and beat! I wake up with it every single day. The feeling you get when listening to music is just ??? SPEECHLESS!! I feel like my heartbeats rhym with the music chords, don't you?
Anyways I think it's amazing. Your poem is short but it has a deep meaning.