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All You Want, All I Want

June 18, 2014
By RebeccaReader PLATINUM, New York, New York
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RebeccaReader PLATINUM, New York, New York
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&quot;If you can keep your head when all about you <br /> Are losing theirs and blaming it on you,&quot;

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Bringing stars from heaven is an impossible task
But to bring a star for you all you have to do is ask
Bring the moon from heaven is an impossible task
But if that is your wish I will make it pass
Bring the sun out into the rain is a difficult task
But if you are sad I will command the clouds to pass
Bringing a smile on your face is all I want

© Adam L., Washington, DC

The author's comments:
I wrote this piece because I'm going through a different stage in my life. A time that most people will experience sometime in their early stages of life. Where the like someone and will do anything for that someone. I want people to know that love isn't just a one way street. Both people in a relationship have to give and take. Also love isn't about giving expensive things for each other, it's about making each other happy
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RebeccaReader PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 12 2014 at 6:14 pm
RebeccaReader PLATINUM, New York, New York
20 articles 2 photos 14 comments

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&quot;If you can keep your head when all about you <br /> Are losing theirs and blaming it on you,&quot;

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Why thank you. I'm very flattered and I will keep them coming. 
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 12 2014 at 9:55 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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I agree with what you said! It's true! Love is loving someone else or people mor than yourselves and just wanting to make them happy. You're poem is wonderful! You're a great writer! I hope more poems are coming! ^_^ thank you, for sharing this!
RebeccaReader PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 11:50 am
RebeccaReader PLATINUM, New York, New York
20 articles 2 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you can keep your head when all about you <br /> Are losing theirs and blaming it on you,&quot;

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so if i did what would it do?
RebeccaReader PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 5 2014 at 9:19 am
RebeccaReader PLATINUM, New York, New York
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&quot;If you can keep your head when all about you <br /> Are losing theirs and blaming it on you,&quot;

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yes it was for you know who. but i don't know if i shoudl share it. would it get his attention if i did?
monikitty12 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2014 at 6:53 pm
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awwwwww this is so sweet! Is this for a certain someone? Maybe you should share this link on facebook lol just a suggestion ;)