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June 23, 2014
By theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Can&#039;t keep my eyes from the circling sky,<br /> Tongue-tied and twisted<br /> Just an earth-bound misfit, I&quot;<br /> ~Pink Floyd<br /> <br /> &quot;Now is blessed<br /> The rest<br /> remembered &quot; <br /> <br /> ~Jim Morrison

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In atmospheric indigo ponds, a crescent moon floats
Bobbing above soft, feathered tree silhouettes
While the rest of the world is dotted with stars,
White tempera paint on a dark surface

How I’d love to feel moon’s cool stone
Or grasp the dust pan
That collects the shimmering gold dust
God's stars shed
I'd relish it
Until gasps of ombre dawn emerge
And the last strips of indigo imprint on my soul

© Allison H., Vancouver, WA

The author's comments:
I saw this amazing night sky while letting my dog outside and I just had to describe it.
Psalms 148:3-6
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theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 2 2014 at 12:51 am
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
47 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Can&#039;t keep my eyes from the circling sky,<br /> Tongue-tied and twisted<br /> Just an earth-bound misfit, I&quot;<br /> ~Pink Floyd<br /> <br /> &quot;Now is blessed<br /> The rest<br /> remembered &quot; <br /> <br /> ~Jim Morrison

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Aww thank you. :) I tried my best. :)
TheVoiceOfInk GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2014 at 1:40 pm
TheVoiceOfInk GOLD, Calgary, Other
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That's wonderful that you're so dedicated! I could never spend that long on a single poem, you should be very proud :D
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 26 2014 at 8:41 pm
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
47 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Can&#039;t keep my eyes from the circling sky,<br /> Tongue-tied and twisted<br /> Just an earth-bound misfit, I&quot;<br /> ~Pink Floyd<br /> <br /> &quot;Now is blessed<br /> The rest<br /> remembered &quot; <br /> <br /> ~Jim Morrison

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Thank you for commenting! It is so kind of you. I worked really hard on this poem ( a couple of months and a TON of hours) and it means a lot to me that you liked it. :) 
TheVoiceOfInk GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2014 at 6:50 pm
TheVoiceOfInk GOLD, Calgary, Other
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Such a poetic sound! Greatwork, these are the poems I like best! :)