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Inhibited Criminal

July 3, 2014
By Rawad BRONZE, Beit Chabab, Other
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Rawad BRONZE, Beit Chabab, Other
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"The self-same well from which our laughter rises was often times filled with our tears." - Kahlil Gibran

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Behind these eyes lies an ocean of blood and loathing
Behind these eyes stands the warrior who has borne the slaughtering
Behind these eyes lives a vine, scathed and torn into into tiny shreddings
For I have survived the tug of war
And run vast distances in the battlefield
For I have abandoned a chain of broken hearts' strands
And left a trail of teardrops in the sand
For I have buried treasures that are too hard to find
Treasures of vengeance and my peace of mind
Just to fill the gaps in the bowels of your heart
For I have died and lived a thousand times
And craved to discover your soul's mines
Where behind these eyes, my eyes
Appear my innocence and purity
Not my crimes

© Lindsay S., Billings, MT

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This article has 18 comments.

staryskies GOLD said...
on Jul. 15 2014 at 9:27 am
staryskies GOLD, Siteki, Other
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Bea.ti.ful! wow, i relay loved it, the sadness and the realness. great work.
staryskies GOLD said...
on Jul. 15 2014 at 9:26 am
staryskies GOLD, Siteki, Other
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Beautiful! woow, i love it. the sadness and the realness.this is realy great work :))
Rawad BRONZE said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 2:33 pm
Rawad BRONZE, Beit Chabab, Other
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"The self-same well from which our laughter rises was often times filled with our tears." - Kahlil Gibran

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Thank you, Kyline!
Rawad BRONZE said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 2:33 pm
Rawad BRONZE, Beit Chabab, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The self-same well from which our laughter rises was often times filled with our tears." - Kahlil Gibran

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Thank you!
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 2:28 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

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I like how you worded it and used the words.
Kaydie PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 2:25 pm
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&quot;There are all these ideas about what is perfect and what is beautifu land what is smart,but the most appealing thing is,that which is me is nobody else&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Jennifer Lopez

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real criminal.....gud one
Rawad BRONZE said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 2:12 pm
Rawad BRONZE, Beit Chabab, Other
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&quot;The self-same well from which our laughter rises was often times filled with our tears.&quot; - Kahlil Gibran

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Thank you!
WickedDreamer PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 8:02 am
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
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Good use of words. Well composed. Keep up the great work.
Rawad BRONZE said...
on Jul. 10 2014 at 2:04 pm
Rawad BRONZE, Beit Chabab, Other
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&quot;The self-same well from which our laughter rises was often times filled with our tears.&quot; - Kahlil Gibran

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I highly appreciate your kind words. Kudos!!
Rawad BRONZE said...
on Jul. 10 2014 at 2:03 pm
Rawad BRONZE, Beit Chabab, Other
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&quot;The self-same well from which our laughter rises was often times filled with our tears.&quot; - Kahlil Gibran

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Thank you for reading my article. I hope it was worth it!
Rawad BRONZE said...
on Jul. 10 2014 at 2:01 pm
Rawad BRONZE, Beit Chabab, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The self-same well from which our laughter rises was often times filled with our tears.&quot; - Kahlil Gibran

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I'll try my best to write an article soon. Thank you!!
Rawad BRONZE said...
on Jul. 10 2014 at 2:01 pm
Rawad BRONZE, Beit Chabab, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The self-same well from which our laughter rises was often times filled with our tears.&quot; - Kahlil Gibran

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Thank you for enjoying it!
HudaZav SILVER said...
on Jul. 10 2014 at 10:08 am
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
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&quot;Nothing is impossible; the word itself says &#039;I&#039;m possible&#039;!&quot; -Audrey Hepburn

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I like your descriptions and use of vocab. You're a very good writer!
Sparrow01 SILVER said...
on Jul. 9 2014 at 1:52 pm
Sparrow01 SILVER, Appalachin, New York
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I like how it talks about the 'criminal's' stained past but all it wants is redemption. It's very powerful. I enjoy reading works like yours :)
Princess.Renda GOLD said...
on Jul. 9 2014 at 11:56 am
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
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The flow, the writing, all of it was amazing! You have a great talent. I hope to see more of your work posted!
midnightwoah said...
on Jul. 9 2014 at 10:19 am
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It seems as if the person who is speaking is trapped in his own mind. Very intriguing as a inhibited or locked up criminal! You made me think and I like that. Keep writing!
Rawad BRONZE said...
on Jul. 8 2014 at 6:30 pm
Rawad BRONZE, Beit Chabab, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The self-same well from which our laughter rises was often times filled with our tears.&quot; - Kahlil Gibran

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OMG! Much appreciated. Thank you very much!
TheOceansBlackBird SILVER said...
on Jul. 8 2014 at 6:28 pm
TheOceansBlackBird SILVER, Richmond, California
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One persons craziness is another persons reality<br /> -Tim Burton<br /> <br /> and then there&#039;s this one<br /> ╭&cap;╮（︶︿︶）╭&cap;╮

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This was heartbreaking and beautiful. I hope you continue to write, and I will read anything you write, for I have to say that in just reading this poem, I can see you have an amazing gift.