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Immortal

July 5, 2014
By CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
53 articles 40 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens


Over the river a hen calls to her chick,
I don’t know where they are going,
But I know how they will end.
It’s the same way everyone else ends,
Death.

I think scientists aren’t really trying to create immortality,
I think they are just saying they are to toy with our minds,
To make us think death shouldn’t cross our minds,
To make us think we won’t ever have to grieve over a loved one anymore.

But what would they do once the Earth becomes over run?
Kill us of one by one?
Send us off into the depths of space?

If only I were immortal.



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on Jul. 11 2014 at 6:20 pm
lovelifeandlivelonger GOLD, Newburgh, New York
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Love me for me.

wow thats great  

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on Jul. 11 2014 at 2:30 pm
Rawad BRONZE, Beit Chabab, Other
2 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The self-same well from which our laughter rises was often times filled with our tears.&quot; - Kahlil Gibran

I love the imagery, Good job!!

on Jul. 7 2014 at 10:50 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
53 articles 40 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

Thanks Liv!

on Jul. 7 2014 at 8:21 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

This is amazing (as usual) great job!