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Immortal

July 5, 2014
By CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
53 articles 40 photos 204 comments

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Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

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Over the river a hen calls to her chick,
I don’t know where they are going,
But I know how they will end.
It’s the same way everyone else ends,
Death.

I think scientists aren’t really trying to create immortality,
I think they are just saying they are to toy with our minds,
To make us think death shouldn’t cross our minds,
To make us think we won’t ever have to grieve over a loved one anymore.

But what would they do once the Earth becomes over run?
Kill us of one by one?
Send us off into the depths of space?

If only I were immortal.

© Allison S., Eau Claire, WI

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lovelifeandlivelonger GOLD said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 6:20 pm
lovelifeandlivelonger GOLD, Newburgh, New York
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Love me for me.

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wow thats great  
Rawad BRONZE said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 2:30 pm
Rawad BRONZE, Beit Chabab, Other
2 articles 1 photo 19 comments

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&quot;The self-same well from which our laughter rises was often times filled with our tears.&quot; - Kahlil Gibran

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I love the imagery, Good job!!
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 7 2014 at 10:50 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
53 articles 40 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

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Thanks Liv!
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jul. 7 2014 at 8:21 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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This is amazing (as usual) great job!