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I'm no punching bag

September 7, 2014
By Infralalenshka BRONZE, Boom A Chick A Wow Town, Other
Infralalenshka BRONZE, Boom A Chick A Wow Town, Other
3 articles 1 photo 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
All writers are vain, selfish, and lazy, and at the very bottom of their motives there lies a mystery. -Georges Orwell<br /> It is dangerous to be right in matters on which the established authorities are wrong.<br /> To hold a pen is to be at war. -Voltaire


I don't want to be there when you're sad,

Because you treat me like a punching bag.

Poison words thrown all around

Coming into my head with punches and sounds.

I've been trying to keep my brain away.

I've succeeded 'til today.

Today, your words hit too hard.

You finally played your strongest card.

What hurts so much to hurt another?

I'll go away, I won't be a bother.

So today, I have decided, now

That I won't get bullied, even if I don't know how.

How to end this neverending circle.

Thanks to you my arms are purple.


The author's comments:

Now she's just somebody that I used to know...


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on Oct. 23 2015 at 5:07 pm
MidnightDrexm BRONZE, Switzerland, Other
2 articles 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
- It&#039;s better to fail in originality than to succeed in immitation.

I looked at this poem and your essay ''The green dot'' and I think that you're an amazing writer with a lot of talent and potential. You should definitely keep writing. :) @Infralalenshka

on Oct. 19 2015 at 1:21 am
Infralalenshka BRONZE, Boom A Chick A Wow Town, Other
3 articles 1 photo 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
All writers are vain, selfish, and lazy, and at the very bottom of their motives there lies a mystery. -Georges Orwell<br /> It is dangerous to be right in matters on which the established authorities are wrong.<br /> To hold a pen is to be at war. -Voltaire

Thank you so much for the feedback! I just fixed the typo, waiting for it to be reviewed by Teen Ink *rolls eyes*.

on Oct. 17 2015 at 9:16 pm
writer-violist DIAMOND, Jenks, Oklahoma
63 articles 4 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you.&rdquo; <br /> ― Maya Angelou, I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings

Wow, great job with this poem. I like the rhyme scheme that you have and how this poem is personal. I like how you line spaced the piece. I have two suggestions. Number one is I suggest you tell everyone to come vote and like this poem and number two, I suggest that you can change "don,t" to "don't". I really like the line, "That I won't get bullied, even if I don,t know how." Great job with the line spacing. Please keep writing! :)

HammadWaseem said...
on Sep. 28 2015 at 2:56 pm
HammadWaseem, Lahore, Other
0 articles 5 photos 283 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be proud of who you are.<br /> -Eminem<br /> <br /> You can&#039;t see me<br /> -John Cena<br /> <br /> Ooh, somebody stop me!<br /> -Mask

Thats nice! @Infralalenshka btw will you check, rate and comment on my teen ink video named,"The Unbeatable Breakdancer"?