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Spring

November 10, 2014
By reidaboutme SILVER, Alden, Kansas
reidaboutme SILVER, Alden, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"To be nobody- but- yourself in a world which is doing it's best, night and day, to make you everybody else, means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."-ee cummings


Spring is the season 

of unrequited love

a broken heart

broken clouds

tears falling

rain pouring

flowers reaching toward the sun

my arms reaching toward you


The author's comments:

Part 2 of a 4 part series of poems about seasons. 


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Beila BRONZE said...
on Mar. 9 2015 at 1:34 am
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco." -Mark Twain

I love the fresh perspective on spring and its "new beginnings." The broken heart, broken clouds lines both sound beautiful and provide an exquisite image. Well done. :)

SilverLiner said...
on Nov. 26 2014 at 10:19 am
SilverLiner, Accra, Other
0 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"uhhhhhhhhh..."

i love this piece too... jumping to summer

on Nov. 19 2014 at 4:26 pm
BenitoJuarez98 SILVER, Grosse Pointe Woods, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"What is better - to be born good, or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?" (Paarthurnax, Fourth Era)

This is an excellent juxtaposition of Spring and Love. I rally like what you have here.