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Old Loves Poem

January 27, 2015
By Undertaker SILVER, Tryon, Nebraska
Undertaker SILVER, Tryon, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
always live to the fullest


He was my light and my sunshine
He was my hope and my dreams
I loved him
And I think he loved me
We had a bond that I have never felt
Then we broke and I had never dealt
Dealt with such pain
Like swimming in my brain
It’s all scrambled
My emotions confused
My heart is all bruised
I can’t think of a way to handle
I wish I had him
Why can’t he see
That he was all in the world to me
He and I were perfect
Until now, now I regret it
Regret ever falling in love
Then trying to fly like a dove
So I wish that he will read this
And maybe I will regret it
Until then my love
Your unfortunate dove


The author's comments:

I have only loved one person and they broke my heart.


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on Apr. 24 2015 at 1:44 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

That was full of emotion and feelings. Sad yet very truthfula and honest. I'm going through some confusing moments right now, somebody really close to me hurt me so badly, it's like feelings my heart getting ripped of my chest. I never would've expected this coming from the closest person I know. But what kills me even more is that she doesn't even see that hurt me, it's all normal for her as if I were her puppy and she could use me whenever she can. I wish I had the guts to stand up infront of her and say what I think Out Loud! Anyways, sorry I got a little distracted from your poem. However, I found it really inspiring and especially very relatable ^_^ Keep it up. Never forget that you are important. Thank you for sharing this.

on Jan. 27 2015 at 4:45 pm
Dead_Forever BRONZE, Worthington, Iowa
4 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Trying to understand the behavior of some people is like trying to smell the color 9.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Dreams are nothing to wait for. They are something to work for.&quot;

Okay that's dep and sorrowful. It has emotion and understandingness.... I like it. It is related to me, kind of... With all these dudes lying to me and cheating on me, using me... This is a favorite, for me. Becuase it has description of part of my life. Thank you for writing this poem.

on Jan. 27 2015 at 4:41 pm
Blackjack. GOLD, Suffolk, Virginia
13 articles 0 photos 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Take a lesson from &quot;the Greatest Man That Ever Lived,&quot; Austin Aries. The ambition and vision of one depends on how bad@ss they look in sunglasses.&quot; - Me, 2017<br /> <br /> &quot;Who is this Jose, and why is he always being denied?&quot; - Corey Graves, 2016

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